Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Lovely meter. You write very well Ricky.

This were my favourite lines,

"I would lasso each and every Falling Star.
Collect each and every one in a "Glasstein Jar""

A light and heartfelt read.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023

Trying but soon all will see?
Exactly what's been going through me?
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I was wondering what a Glastien jar, unless it was the brand nana me of the artwork bottle/jars on didplay Ricky? But although some of the deserts in Australia are fairly big a hot, I would opt for water, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023

I made up my own words now for many, many years. I sometimes will put in the edit of notes what it is. A glass game jar is just something that's a container that can hold tremendous about of light.
Thank Roy,
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 04-Feb-2023

Thanks for explaining

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem, almost Victorian at some points. To follow Jesus, that should be our quest. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's very good and I enjoyed reading.

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023

Thank you Barbara. When I was writing this I wasn't thinking on the presents or preference of Victorian but I'll go with that!
Doctor Ricky

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A flowing and poetic piece. The list of hyperbole reads almost like a Victorian love poem. The language is varied and the narrative stays on point.

Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023

I've actually never researched Shakespeare's work but if you want to give me the Victorian touch for this love poem.
Much appreciated. Dell's worth. .
Thank you!
Doctor Ricky