Pay Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Pay Day, pt 6"One fine spring day at school
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Comment from Wendy G
I got very tense reading about those guns! This is going to be a very real battle between the forces of evil and those for good, and it is just as well these Bible Study students are so proactive as well as so in tune with the Holy Spirit - the headmaster too. I'm half looking forward to the next piece and half dreading it. Such is the power of your writing! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I got very tense reading about those guns! This is going to be a very real battle between the forces of evil and those for good, and it is just as well these Bible Study students are so proactive as well as so in tune with the Holy Spirit - the headmaster too. I'm half looking forward to the next piece and half dreading it. Such is the power of your writing! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Wow! Thank you for an awesome review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good work, you have the teens determined to protect their school and their friends from an unknown threat. Their strength of character is to be admired and hopefully successful in their aim. Unfortunately, they have classmates determined to throw their own lives and those of others away.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Very good work, you have the teens determined to protect their school and their friends from an unknown threat. Their strength of character is to be admired and hopefully successful in their aim. Unfortunately, they have classmates determined to throw their own lives and those of others away.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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It doesn't look good.
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from lyenochka
You certainly know a lot about guns and ammunition. I have no idea what the specific types mean. But I do sense a ramping up of the violence-intending kids and the waning of the prayer-arming kids. It looks a bit ominous.
I wondered about the Bible Club and the restrictions as to how it needed to be conducted at each school. That's so much an American culture thing that has crept into Christianity here.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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You certainly know a lot about guns and ammunition. I have no idea what the specific types mean. But I do sense a ramping up of the violence-intending kids and the waning of the prayer-arming kids. It looks a bit ominous.
I wondered about the Bible Club and the restrictions as to how it needed to be conducted at each school. That's so much an American culture thing that has crept into Christianity here.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review.
The rules are as I described in most districts: schools cannot discriminate against religious clubs, but no direct school involvement. But some fearful leaders kowtow to forceful opposition - unfortunately.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
WOW! I don't know why, but I was not expecting these plans of mayhem to begin to fester in the minds of the troubled kids - and more or less the same plan in all cases. This is in danger of ending so very violently. Whatever happens, the parayers are gonig to be necessary. I feel the prayer group need to find a way to re-boost their numbers... kay
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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WOW! I don't know why, but I was not expecting these plans of mayhem to begin to fester in the minds of the troubled kids - and more or less the same plan in all cases. This is in danger of ending so very violently. Whatever happens, the parayers are gonig to be necessary. I feel the prayer group need to find a way to re-boost their numbers... kay
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for a wonderful review. All I can say is to hang on.
Comment from royowen
They obviously got it right in the end. There have been shootings in congregations from tome to time, if I was Satan thst's what I would do to dusrupt what's going on, but then I'm neither God nor Satan, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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They obviously got it right in the end. There have been shootings in congregations from tome to time, if I was Satan thst's what I would do to dusrupt what's going on, but then I'm neither God nor Satan, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Dr. Westman is a good leader; he's making sure they follow guidelines so that the club isn't disbanded for not doing so.
Geez, everyone is arming up and that was a difficult part of the story to read. You just know that there's a kid in every school who is at least daydreaming about doing this!
Two good, focused topics for prayer - both needed in today's schools.
Another good chapter, Wayne. I'm liking this series.
Have a good weekend,
Pam
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Dr. Westman is a good leader; he's making sure they follow guidelines so that the club isn't disbanded for not doing so.
Geez, everyone is arming up and that was a difficult part of the story to read. You just know that there's a kid in every school who is at least daydreaming about doing this!
Two good, focused topics for prayer - both needed in today's schools.
Another good chapter, Wayne. I'm liking this series.
Have a good weekend,
Pam
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent chapter. I came in late in your story but it held my attention from beginning to end. There is one tiny edit near the beginning. "The Bible Club member(s). I do believe people get messages from God, I have had two. And I believe in the power of prayer. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent chapter. I came in late in your story but it held my attention from beginning to end. There is one tiny edit near the beginning. "The Bible Club member(s). I do believe people get messages from God, I have had two. And I believe in the power of prayer. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This payday part 6 was well written.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a most Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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This payday part 6 was well written.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a most Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review.
