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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Once again, the pain and the emotion come through loud and clear. Losing a child is extremely hard, especially when they're so full of life.

Me, my family, my only son Jay? (comma needed after 'son')

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Once again the pain will come back. I usually bring it back every two to three beautiful poems.
    Thanks again!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
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Auto crashes mostly come with speed playing the devil spurned by the need for speed.oeople are so reckless with their lives and others tool I pray others sign their donors cards so ypthey can pass life onto another who could use it wisely and save their life so life keeps on giving and not keep grieving because you done wonderful ypthing by helping another live like you said your count was four to live a better life.
Feb.4-2023

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    There's nothing more noble than with the brotherhood of mankind. Sacrificing your very own life in order others that can live again!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from JT traveller
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Only joy? Just one boy? I don't quite understand but you are very blessed to have five children.

Another great poem. Well written and versed. Lovely choice of words. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    To learn the answer to why there's only one boy you need, of course to read the end of notes. Jacqueline.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
reply by JT traveller on 04-Feb-2023
    I did read the notes. You clearly have a very kind interest in theology. I learn from you every day.