Sweet Dreams Children
Childhood dreams possibly.13 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is A very nice children's poem with 25 words. A photo would enhance your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. I love magical fairy stories too. ð???
  |
This is A very nice children's poem with 25 words. A photo would enhance your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. I love magical fairy stories too. ð???
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
Comment from Eternal Muse
I loved your gentle poem for children and the color pink. It's so pacifying and tender. Sounds like a lullaby.
Inviting children to dream of fairies, elves, Aladdin and magical things.
Charming. Good luck in the contest.
|
I loved your gentle poem for children and the color pink. It's so pacifying and tender. Sounds like a lullaby.
Inviting children to dream of fairies, elves, Aladdin and magical things.
Charming. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
Comment from leather
This a delightful poem and would do for an excellent nighttime reading.
It would be like implanting pleasant thoughts and visions for the child's nighttime hours.
Thanks for writing.
|
This a delightful poem and would do for an excellent nighttime reading.
It would be like implanting pleasant thoughts and visions for the child's nighttime hours.
Thanks for writing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
Comment from Aussie
Well done. Short and sweet, children's attention is short so a longish poem would not hold their interest. I liked it for it's content. I wish you well in the writing prompt 25 words. K xx
|
Well done. Short and sweet, children's attention is short so a longish poem would not hold their interest. I liked it for it's content. I wish you well in the writing prompt 25 words. K xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Children are so precious.
Good word count. I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
|
Wonderful entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Children are so precious.
Good word count. I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer,
What a delightful offering.
Short.
Sweet.
Although your offering does not completely contain rhymes, the lines flow smoothly.
Beautiful.
Best Wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
|
Hello, Mystery Writer,
What a delightful offering.
Short.
Sweet.
Although your offering does not completely contain rhymes, the lines flow smoothly.
Beautiful.
Best Wishes!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
Comment from F. William Lester
Well done and in exactly twenty-five words. You tried something a little different and wrote a poem that brought back happy memories of my childhood and that of my children. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.
|
Well done and in exactly twenty-five words. You tried something a little different and wrote a poem that brought back happy memories of my childhood and that of my children. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Stay well.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I pondered
on these words and thought about how children love fairy stories and
magical things! I feel these words are soothing and sweet. The poem
flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes - I like knowing
the history of the poem.
|
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I pondered
on these words and thought about how children love fairy stories and
magical things! I feel these words are soothing and sweet. The poem
flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes - I like knowing
the history of the poem.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
Comment from JLR
Dear poet, This word count accurate and you have delivered a meaning filled complete conceptual work that delivers a message to ponder, great success in the voting booth.
|
Dear poet, This word count accurate and you have delivered a meaning filled complete conceptual work that delivers a message to ponder, great success in the voting booth.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
Comment from JT traveller
This would be a great competitor in the Children's poem category as well as the twenty five word entry.
Great composition and flow. A lovely, tingly energy.
|
This would be a great competitor in the Children's poem category as well as the twenty five word entry.
Great composition and flow. A lovely, tingly energy.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
