Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "~ Moonbeam ~"Romantic Tanka Poems
17 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. An amazing presentation I love the Color scheme you chose for your background and fonts. Very nicely done. Photos compliments your words well.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem. An amazing presentation I love the Color scheme you chose for your background and fonts. Very nicely done. Photos compliments your words well.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Joanne. I appreciate your insightful review. I hope you have a wonderful day and night.
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh how lovely and colorful are your moonbeams as they dance across my imagination. Your verse is lively with the reference to dancing fireflies. So well done,Gypsy!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Oh how lovely and colorful are your moonbeams as they dance across my imagination. Your verse is lively with the reference to dancing fireflies. So well done,Gypsy!!
Melissa
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your insightful review. I hope you have a wonderful day and night.
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Comment from JT traveller
Yet another amazing competition. You certainly have a unique style and flair.
Fantastic photography to include as well. "Moonbeam pulls..." are particularly appealing when the words are placed together. Indicative of tidal flow perhaps?
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Yet another amazing competition. You certainly have a unique style and flair.
Fantastic photography to include as well. "Moonbeam pulls..." are particularly appealing when the words are placed together. Indicative of tidal flow perhaps?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, fireflies and stars do have similar affects when they are in full view, as while looking up at the stars they do seem to be moving, very well written and prresented****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Beautiful, fireflies and stars do have similar affects when they are in full view, as while looking up at the stars they do seem to be moving, very well written and prresented****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful presentation Gypsy. The moonbeam and the fireflies working together and far apart in the dance of love. I love the Atticus quote in your notes. Well done all round with much thought and creativity shown. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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A beautiful presentation Gypsy. The moonbeam and the fireflies working together and far apart in the dance of love. I love the Atticus quote in your notes. Well done all round with much thought and creativity shown. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from royowen
I've only ever encountered fire flies once in my entire life, and thst was when we stayed on a farm in Manchester county in Pennsylvania, some summers ago, I believe the do it to attract partners, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I've only ever encountered fire flies once in my entire life, and thst was when we stayed on a farm in Manchester county in Pennsylvania, some summers ago, I believe the do it to attract partners, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never thought of a firefly as being amorous, but why not. It's one of God's creatures. I enjoyed the imagery of 'sea of brilliant stars. That's a great picture. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I never thought of a firefly as being amorous, but why not. It's one of God's creatures. I enjoyed the imagery of 'sea of brilliant stars. That's a great picture. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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It's a metaphor.. but who knows if insects feel love. (*÷*) Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Sherry SG
Such beautiful imagery and such a captivating image and color palette you have chosen there. I enjoyed read this luminous piece. Thank you for sharing notes about the Tanka.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Such beautiful imagery and such a captivating image and color palette you have chosen there. I enjoyed read this luminous piece. Thank you for sharing notes about the Tanka.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- good flow- good use of metaphors- moonbeam pulls across -suggestion -behind) a sea of brilliant stars - in (a)love dance (the) love dance - Good job AP
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I like your tanks poem- good picture presentation- good flow- good use of metaphors- moonbeam pulls across -suggestion -behind) a sea of brilliant stars - in (a)love dance (the) love dance - Good job AP
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. I like it the way it is, but Thank you.
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
I often get lost reading your haikus and other shorties. This one has nice imagery but "pulls across the sea" ?? I don't get, and when are "amorous fireflies over the sea? I was a sailor for ten years and never say a firefly at night at sea. No ill intent intended. Tom
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I often get lost reading your haikus and other shorties. This one has nice imagery but "pulls across the sea" ?? I don't get, and when are "amorous fireflies over the sea? I was a sailor for ten years and never say a firefly at night at sea. No ill intent intended. Tom
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Is poetic, not factual. You either feel it or you don't. Haiku is a visual moment in time. Thank you.
Gypsy