Artificial Feelings Intelligence
25 Word Poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Dear poet, This word count accurate and you have delivered a meaning filled complete conceptual work that delivers a message to ponder, great success in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Dear poet, This word count accurate and you have delivered a meaning filled complete conceptual work that delivers a message to ponder, great success in the voting booth.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review, JLR. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I really like this excellent poem. I'm sorry I don't have a six for you. This poem deserves one. I've often thought about the future of AIs and what it means for humankind.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I really like this excellent poem. I'm sorry I don't have a six for you. This poem deserves one. I've often thought about the future of AIs and what it means for humankind.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and big sixer offer, Mary. I really appreciate the kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
A well-written piece, with a powerful message. I'm not sure AI is wicked. I think it's a tool like anything else and it's all about how we as humans choose to use it.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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A well-written piece, with a powerful message. I'm not sure AI is wicked. I think it's a tool like anything else and it's all about how we as humans choose to use it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Sarah. Yes, only we can make them wicked or not. Fingers crossed we don't.
Comment from RodG
I am amazed at how quickly technology evolves and AI is progressing faster than Iever imagined. Your poem has the tone of all the TERMINATOR movies, and you do make us wonder if they--or their creators--will ever feel remorse.
Your message is clearly conveyed with good use of rhyme. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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I am amazed at how quickly technology evolves and AI is progressing faster than Iever imagined. Your poem has the tone of all the TERMINATOR movies, and you do make us wonder if they--or their creators--will ever feel remorse.
Your message is clearly conveyed with good use of rhyme. Rod
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Rod. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Kaiku
Did you ever watch the movie `Collossus` I think it was called that. A super computer took on an intelligence of its own. Not the only movie of its kind but one of the first. Your 25 words bring up a real dilemma.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Did you ever watch the movie `Collossus` I think it was called that. A super computer took on an intelligence of its own. Not the only movie of its kind but one of the first. Your 25 words bring up a real dilemma.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Kaiku. I really appreciate it, friend. Have yourself a great weekend.
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Yes sir