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Romantic Tanka Poems

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Comment from kahpot
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I love the moon and everything it reflects, i am now thinking That her hair is that of the earth, as we need to be cradled at the moment, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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I really enjoy reading your modern tankas when you post them. There is a bit of rhyme in this one... it seems to me. I liked it. Your wonderful choice of artwork really adds depth to this one.

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
    Sometimes a little rhyme happens naturally, I can't do it if I have to. I do pay attention to sounds. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your tanks modern poem - beautiful picture presentation !!! Especially like the flow with a rhyming
Quality- smooth- good flow- suggest- maybe change 'and rays" to 'with' rays even smoother verbally- Good Job AP

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you, ap. I appreciate your help with grammar and kind review.

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Comment from Ricky1024
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Nicely presented with amazing art work.
This also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful weekend.

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Just beautiful with the image of words and presentation of the stardust on her hair and the rays of Jupiter in her eyes. I enjoyed reading this for the image and the mood.
Beautiful Tanka
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi MariVal,
This a good modern tanka which gives strong images. It seems that a female is in the moonlight looking and the sky dreaming of her past, present or future.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Your exceptional review means a lot coming from you. Thank you very much, Joan. Have a wonderful weekend!

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reply by dragonpoet on 04-Feb-2023
    You are most kindly welcome, MariVal.
    Joan.
    Same to you.
    Joan
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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This put me in mind of the famous picture of a child cradled in the crescent moon, you've added the narrative of her celestial rest.

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Pam

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love the imagery of the stardust on her hair and the rays of Jupiter in her eyes, along with being cradled in the crescent moon. This is another beautiful poem. You did a wonderful job with this poem.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review.

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Comment from jessizero
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This was a beautiful poem. I loved the imagery of stardust and other wonders of the night sky. As always, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, Jessi. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!

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Comment from royowen
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I like the way you stardust on her hair, rather than in the hair, makes a difference I also, like the artwork, the colour embellishment and the wording and it's imagery, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind review and the time you spent reading it. Happy Weekend!

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reply by royowen on 03-Feb-2023
    Most welcome