In the Air
a 5-7-514 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderful haiku for the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed your presentation very much. May you have a good evening and may God bless you and your writing . Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This is a wonderful haiku for the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I enjoyed your presentation very much. May you have a good evening and may God bless you and your writing . Patricia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, Patricia, for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the branches, rain, and storm.
-You paint a good word picture of the pink branches swaying in the breeze.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
*Note: The committee might count the hyphenated word as one syllable.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describing the branches, rain, and storm.
-You paint a good word picture of the pink branches swaying in the breeze.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
*Note: The committee might count the hyphenated word as one syllable.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Pam, for your kind words. I took a chance on that hyphenated word as I hadn't heard of that possibility before. One word but not one syllable. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
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You are very welcome, Faith.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
And the inference of course is that the blossom will be gone, ceding its place before the violence of the storm. So much that is beautiful in nature is regrettably short-lived. It's tragic really. kay
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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And the inference of course is that the blossom will be gone, ceding its place before the violence of the storm. So much that is beautiful in nature is regrettably short-lived. It's tragic really. kay
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Short-lived, yes, and all the more reason to stop and enjoy it. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Sally Law
I really enjoyed this one, mystery poet. Beautifully written and illustrated for the nature 5-7-5. A winner here for sure. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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I really enjoyed this one, mystery poet. Beautifully written and illustrated for the nature 5-7-5. A winner here for sure. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, Sally, for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
