Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What a fun poem to read aloud. I like the alliteration of the 'p' and 'd' sounds, also, the assonance of the 'a' vowel in the first line.
Best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks so much.