Moonbeams
Seven words8 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I like the image prompting the skilful words of your poem. The moonbeams would indeed seem to be frolicking as they dance through the trees, creating shadows. Well done! And best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I like the image prompting the skilful words of your poem. The moonbeams would indeed seem to be frolicking as they dance through the trees, creating shadows. Well done! And best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you Wendy!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your words in your poem. The sight of a ray of moonbeams bounces off the rippling waters of the sea. The sea looks silver as the light is reflected by the moon. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Like your words in your poem. The sight of a ray of moonbeams bounces off the rippling waters of the sea. The sea looks silver as the light is reflected by the moon. Like your poem.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much Rosemary.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry in the "Seven Words or Less" poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like it centered because that position makes it more prominent. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I like that you personified the moonbeams.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry in the "Seven Words or Less" poetry contest. The text is a great size. I like it centered because that position makes it more prominent. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. I like that you personified the moonbeams.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Nicki Nance
A good arrangement of a few words. I had not thought of moonbeams as frolicking, but your poem and the perfectly chosen graphic breathed life Into them.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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A good arrangement of a few words. I had not thought of moonbeams as frolicking, but your poem and the perfectly chosen graphic breathed life Into them.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Good poem. I enjoyed the read. Beautiful artwork that you chose to go along with your poem. You did a great job with the way that you described the moonbeams. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Good poem. I enjoyed the read. Beautiful artwork that you chose to go along with your poem. You did a great job with the way that you described the moonbeams. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Kaiku
Your entry into the contest is delightful. I am not a big fan of the style of font used as I found it very difficult to read, although I understand why it was used. Good luck
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Your entry into the contest is delightful. I am not a big fan of the style of font used as I found it very difficult to read, although I understand why it was used. Good luck
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from zanya
Yes -a message of hope formulated and evoked by a mere seven words here for the Seven word poem contest with a beautiful visual to inspire Hope- thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Yes -a message of hope formulated and evoked by a mere seven words here for the Seven word poem contest with a beautiful visual to inspire Hope- thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much Zanya!
Comment from jessizero
This was an uplifting poem. I enjoyed your sentiment, and you did a good job of sharing it in seven words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This was an uplifting poem. I enjoyed your sentiment, and you did a good job of sharing it in seven words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, sweet Jess.
