Snow Time Like the Present
Short Story 329 words16 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
I enjoyed your ice skating leaving sharp furrows in the clobbered English language.
Frozen for thousands of years you have defrosted and cooked a chilling new recipie. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed your ice skating leaving sharp furrows in the clobbered English language.
Frozen for thousands of years you have defrosted and cooked a chilling new recipie. :-))Z.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing an older post!
Comment from Lisasview
I do believe that I have read and reviewed other words of yours but I am so new to this that I could be wrong... So I decided to look at your portfolio and I found this hysterical poem and there was snow-chance I would miss reading and reviewing it.....
Funny oh snow funny,
Lisasview
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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I do believe that I have read and reviewed other words of yours but I am so new to this that I could be wrong... So I decided to look at your portfolio and I found this hysterical poem and there was snow-chance I would miss reading and reviewing it.....
Funny oh snow funny,
Lisasview
Comment Written 04-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your super review.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Somehow this feels appropriate to read this on Valentine's Day! Enjoyed all your pun-like words incorporating "ice" and "frost" for such a dating serv-ice. Congratulations on the win!!!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Lol! Somehow this feels appropriate to read this on Valentine's Day! Enjoyed all your pun-like words incorporating "ice" and "frost" for such a dating serv-ice. Congratulations on the win!!!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
A creative an fun approach to the contest challenge. I was smiling throughout the piece as I enjoyed your play on words. I'm not one for the cold, but joining these flakes sounds like fun.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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A creative an fun approach to the contest challenge. I was smiling throughout the piece as I enjoyed your play on words. I'm not one for the cold, but joining these flakes sounds like fun.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your nice review.
Comment from BethShelby
This was fun to read. I love all the word play that went on with this piece. I might sign up for your Snowy Hearts club but I need that $9.95 to promote my stories for four day on FanStory. Very clever.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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This was fun to read. I love all the word play that went on with this piece. I might sign up for your Snowy Hearts club but I need that $9.95 to promote my stories for four day on FanStory. Very clever.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Guess most of us are on a strict budget, ha ha.
Comment from Mark Kuglin
A unique, creative, playful and enjoyable read.
Although the tone and technique was soon obvious, I found myself hooked to the end.
Nicely done!
Thanks for posting it.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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A unique, creative, playful and enjoyable read.
Although the tone and technique was soon obvious, I found myself hooked to the end.
Nicely done!
Thanks for posting it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your generous six-star rating. That just made my night.
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My pleasure
Comment from JT traveller
Very witty and clever. Great play on the cold and ice theme. I loved it for a Saturday morning giggle. We have all met our fair share of "flakes". Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Very witty and clever. Great play on the cold and ice theme. I loved it for a Saturday morning giggle. We have all met our fair share of "flakes". Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your five-star review.
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😊
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story is a creative take on the writing prompt. I love the way you used all the ice words throughout the story. It gave me a chuckle today. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Your story is a creative take on the writing prompt. I love the way you used all the ice words throughout the story. It gave me a chuckle today. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write and I loved the inventive language in this story that gave this write a leg up to another level and a good entry for the contest, this could be a winner, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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This is a clever write and I loved the inventive language in this story that gave this write a leg up to another level and a good entry for the contest, this could be a winner, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your compliment-filled review.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is cute. I like the play on words. I don't think I'll join the club though. I live in Maine and we have way too many flakes here already! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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This is cute. I like the play on words. I don't think I'll join the club though. I live in Maine and we have way too many flakes here already! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading and commenting today and the five stars.
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You are welcome.