The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from royowen
Well done Sally, the story has got to a place I rather like, hugs and kisses, Tommy has asked the delectable Wills Dams to marry him, and she readily agrees, just to make an honest woman of, attended by a name of someone called Debi Marquette, well done Sally, blessings. Roy
Typo : Unhooked me for what I (was)) about to do.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Well done Sally, the story has got to a place I rather like, hugs and kisses, Tommy has asked the delectable Wills Dams to marry him, and she readily agrees, just to make an honest woman of, attended by a name of someone called Debi Marquette, well done Sally, blessings. Roy
Typo : Unhooked me for what I (was)) about to do.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind help. So glad you enjoyed the chapter too! Sending on my very best to you all.
Sal XOs
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A pleasure Sally
Comment from BethShelby
This is nicely written chapter. No wonder that moving company gets one star ratings. What a terrible accident with the moving van spilling things alont the highway. I enjoyed reading about Tommy and Wills. It sound like true love. The nurse was very helpful with the ring and getting him dressed. I can't wait to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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This is nicely written chapter. No wonder that moving company gets one star ratings. What a terrible accident with the moving van spilling things alont the highway. I enjoyed reading about Tommy and Wills. It sound like true love. The nurse was very helpful with the ring and getting him dressed. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and fun comments. Yeah I think I would give them a one star rating too. I?m glad you enjoyed it all and thank you so much for stopping by. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from BethShelby
This is nicely written chapter. No wonder that moving company gets one star ratings. What a terrible accident with the moving van spilling things alont the highway. I enjoyed reading about Tommy and Wills. It sound like true love. The nurse was very helpful with the ring and getting him dressed. I can't wait to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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This is nicely written chapter. No wonder that moving company gets one star ratings. What a terrible accident with the moving van spilling things alont the highway. I enjoyed reading about Tommy and Wills. It sound like true love. The nurse was very helpful with the ring and getting him dressed. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for the excellent review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it all in the developing love story between Tommy and Willa. More coming up. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
Love is in the air. You did a good job with this chapter. I did find one little spot where you need to add a word. unhooked me for what I (was) about to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Love is in the air. You did a good job with this chapter. I did find one little spot where you need to add a word. unhooked me for what I (was) about to do. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Dear Shirley, thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. Both means so much to me and are so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you all, Sal XOs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I knew that refrigerator was going to cause and accident. Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait for the next installment.
"That's a great idea, second only to duct tape, Brady!"
"Positively brilliant, my main man. It can't hurt." (right up there with 'hold my beer'. What could possibly go wrong?? LOL)
Debi Marquette - great touch.
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I knew that refrigerator was going to cause and accident. Thank you for sharing this with us. I can't wait for the next installment.
"That's a great idea, second only to duct tape, Brady!"
"Positively brilliant, my main man. It can't hurt." (right up there with 'hold my beer'. What could possibly go wrong?? LOL)
Debi Marquette - great touch.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Dear Barbara, thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you enjoyed it all. Sending along my very best and blessings to you always, Sally XOs
