Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

Great chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Even though it was a chapter, to me it almost read like a poem towards the beginning of the story. Great flow of words, and rhyming pattern. The questions asked in the chapter were thought provoking, and had me thinking some of these things too. Your chapter was very interesting. The artwork went well with your story. Nice job. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023

Thanks Forever for sharing your thoughts in a review.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

As long as imperfection walks the earth, there will always be sin. I wonder if I will truly be able to never have the urge to sin, but as Christ resisted the urge, then theoretically at least, so do I, beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Why thanks Roy.
Doing my best but better to come!
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 02-Feb-2023

Well done

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this with us. You've asked some interesting questions. For some reason we aren't to know the answers. That's where faith comes in.

God why does the first snowfall feel so right? (comma after 'God')

God I want to know! (comma after 'God')

As my mind breathes in God why is there still sin God? (comma after 'sin')

Aren't we all steal your children when it all began? (we are still your)

I need to know God? (comma after 'God')

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023

Thanks for this Barbara. When I wrote this this morning at the shelter.
It was kind of dark and I was in a hurry.
But I caught all the comma problems and the one grammar issue.
Thank,
Doctor Ricky