The Wind Is a Soprano
A 2-10-2 poem17 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is abeautifully written 2 10 2 poem. Winds voice sings a sweet song. I Love your spring photo it compliments your words do well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is abeautifully written 2 10 2 poem. Winds voice sings a sweet song. I Love your spring photo it compliments your words do well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Joanne, for your enthusiastic response to my poem.
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Your welcome
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
put this poem all together. I like the title of this poem, as for me, it
says the chimes influence the sounds it makes. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
put this poem all together. I like the title of this poem, as for me, it
says the chimes influence the sounds it makes. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, harmony13, for your high praise of my poem.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Small point - your description says 2-10-4 which should of course be 2-10-2 which is what you have written.
I always like poems which evoke aural images. As I write this I can hear a variety of our windchimes clanging about - not gentle spring breezes but the precursor of yet another summer rainstorm.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Small point - your description says 2-10-4 which should of course be 2-10-2 which is what you have written.
I always like poems which evoke aural images. As I write this I can hear a variety of our windchimes clanging about - not gentle spring breezes but the precursor of yet another summer rainstorm.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Steve, for sharing my poem and the heads-up.
I love wind chimes as you can probably tell. Ah, to be enjoying summer like you!
Comment from Karyn2
I just love wind chimes! Especially if they are pitched tubes. I enjoy how the wind can play an instrument! I like your description here as it being "wind's voice". A perfect image, great title and presentation and really lovely contribution for this contest. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I just love wind chimes! Especially if they are pitched tubes. I enjoy how the wind can play an instrument! I like your description here as it being "wind's voice". A perfect image, great title and presentation and really lovely contribution for this contest. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Karyn, for your marvelous response to my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The whistling wind can indeed move those chimes and create a symphony in Spring and with the added bird song we have an orchestra, I enjoyed the melody here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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The whistling wind can indeed move those chimes and create a symphony in Spring and with the added bird song we have an orchestra, I enjoyed the melody here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. I am delighted you enjoyed the melody.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-10-2, The Wind is a Soprano, has the proper formatting and characterizes the blowing breeze as the sweet song that fills the days with spirit. .............................................
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This 2-10-2, The Wind is a Soprano, has the proper formatting and characterizes the blowing breeze as the sweet song that fills the days with spirit. .............................................
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my poem.
Comment from pome lover
I'm sorry, but you made me smile, comparing the "clang" of wind chimes to a soprano. I do understand though, what you mean by the song of windchimes - I love them, myself. I guess mine must be smaller because they "ring" more than clang.
Still, I give you a 5 because of your thought and all the other words. :)
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I'm sorry, but you made me smile, comparing the "clang" of wind chimes to a soprano. I do understand though, what you mean by the song of windchimes - I love them, myself. I guess mine must be smaller because they "ring" more than clang.
Still, I give you a 5 because of your thought and all the other words. :)
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, pome lover, for sharing my poem. I am delighted it made you smile. My chimes are large and clang rather than ring. Some smaller ones tinkle gaily.
