The Wind Is a Soprano
A 2-10-2 poem17 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem brings the gentle sound of the wind chimes to life, I also feel the soft breeze. Spring is my favorite time of year, rebirth, warmer days, more daylight. Having them all together in one poem is awsome.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Your poem brings the gentle sound of the wind chimes to life, I also feel the soft breeze. Spring is my favorite time of year, rebirth, warmer days, more daylight. Having them all together in one poem is awsome.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I am delighted my poem brought the sound of chimes to life for you. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Oh yes, those wind chimes. Such a sweet sight and a pleasant sound. We have them all through the house, and yet most of the time I forget they are there. They are just an integral part of our lives, a bit like breathing - we would only miss them if they left. kay
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Oh yes, those wind chimes. Such a sweet sight and a pleasant sound. We have them all through the house, and yet most of the time I forget they are there. They are just an integral part of our lives, a bit like breathing - we would only miss them if they left. kay
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I envy you having so many wind chimes throughout your house. Many thanks for sharing my poem, Katherine.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
like your poem. We are ready for spring like your poem. The ringing of the chimes produces an abundance of musical notes, as it gently blows within the wind's air waves.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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like your poem. We are ready for spring like your poem. The ringing of the chimes produces an abundance of musical notes, as it gently blows within the wind's air waves.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Many thanks, Rosemary, for sharing my poem. I am delighted you like it.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love wind chimes and the sounds they make. The wind is telling a story, and they help spread it to the ear of those who will listen.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I love wind chimes and the sounds they make. The wind is telling a story, and they help spread it to the ear of those who will listen.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I have been delightfully surprised to see how many of us on FanStory love wind chimes. Many thanks, Mia, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice presentation. Good imagery of spring and sound of chimes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Wonderful entry for the 2-10-2 Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice presentation. Good imagery of spring and sound of chimes.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Gypsy, for this terrific review.
Comment from jmdg1954
I saw the photo of the chimes and I knew I had to stop by. My wife has, I think four various sized chimes along our back deck and three on the front porch. Oh yea, and two tiny ones hanging from a kitchen cart which our golden retrievers tail likes to find.
So, I most certainly enjoyed your poem!
Cheers. John
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I saw the photo of the chimes and I knew I had to stop by. My wife has, I think four various sized chimes along our back deck and three on the front porch. Oh yea, and two tiny ones hanging from a kitchen cart which our golden retrievers tail likes to find.
So, I most certainly enjoyed your poem!
Cheers. John
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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I envy your wife?s collection of wind chimes. I guess size makes a difference in the sound one hears. Manny thanks, John, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective musical and nature imagery, along
with personification of the wind.
-Good use of alliteration and description of the chimes.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective musical and nature imagery, along
with personification of the wind.
-Good use of alliteration and description of the chimes.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Pam, thank you very much for this comprehensive review of my poem and your kind praise.
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You are very welcome.
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I meant to tell you I really liked the title, too!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 2-10-2 contest. The text is a great size. I like that it is centered on the large visual. It makes the message more prominent. The message is clearly stated. I like that you are personifying the wind as a soprano. It's well-done in the title and poem.
The visual fits the text. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is a good entry into the 2-10-2 contest. The text is a great size. I like that it is centered on the large visual. It makes the message more prominent. The message is clearly stated. I like that you are personifying the wind as a soprano. It's well-done in the title and poem.
The visual fits the text. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, Sandra, for your positive review. I have been very aware of formatting thanks to previous reviews from you. So pleased you like my personification of the wind.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great poem. I especially liked the photo of the wind chimes. Wonderful imagery. I could imagine listening to the wind chimes as the wind blows. I have wind chimes on my porch, as I do love the sound of them. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Great poem. I especially liked the photo of the wind chimes. Wonderful imagery. I could imagine listening to the wind chimes as the wind blows. I have wind chimes on my porch, as I do love the sound of them. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I am delighted, jacquelyn, I could make you hear the chimes. Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely premise you have shared with us in this well written poem. I could easily hear with my inner ear, the soft clangs of beautiful chimes. Well done good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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What a lovely premise you have shared with us in this well written poem. I could easily hear with my inner ear, the soft clangs of beautiful chimes. Well done good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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I am so pleased your inner ear could hear the clanging chimes. Many thanks for your kind praise, Melissa.
