Return to Me
Short poem 4/8/45 total reviews
Comment from WalkerMan
This brief poem about two young sisters or friends happily running through a summer meadow is a delight, as it brings back memories of carefree childhood, whatever each of us may recall from those days.
Especially in today's difficult times, having such memories is helpful in keeping us sane and resistant to depression.
Superb, and aptly illustrated with that beautiful scene.
Congratulations for sliding one vote past several close competitors.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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This brief poem about two young sisters or friends happily running through a summer meadow is a delight, as it brings back memories of carefree childhood, whatever each of us may recall from those days.
Especially in today's difficult times, having such memories is helpful in keeping us sane and resistant to depression.
Superb, and aptly illustrated with that beautiful scene.
Congratulations for sliding one vote past several close competitors.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Mike
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You are most welcome, Susan.
Congratulations on your win. :))
You have a way with words -- even when there are few of them. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poet, this was so sweet and touching, I voted for it and came back to review. Absolutely stunning in this form. My best wishes in the contest. A winner in my eyes!
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Mystery poet, this was so sweet and touching, I voted for it and came back to review. Absolutely stunning in this form. My best wishes in the contest. A winner in my eyes!
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Sally!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated 4-8-4 poetry entry. The text is a great size, and I like that it is centered on the visual. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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This is a beautifully stated 4-8-4 poetry entry. The text is a great size, and I like that it is centered on the visual. The message is clearly stated and easily understood. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Sandra!
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
What a lovely picture you chose to illustrate your 4-8-4. Seeing those children enjoying a summer day makes me--as well as the Speaker--want to return to the simpler times of our youth. Rod
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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What a lovely picture you chose to illustrate your 4-8-4. Seeing those children enjoying a summer day makes me--as well as the Speaker--want to return to the simpler times of our youth. Rod
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Rod, and yes, simpler days ...
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is skillfully executed and contains a lovely flow of words. It is delightful writing. I love the artwork you attached to the poem. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Your poem is skillfully executed and contains a lovely flow of words. It is delightful writing. I love the artwork you attached to the poem. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you!! :-)
