Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Cycle of a Child and a Flower"Do good and feel good poems
43 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
A sugar=sweet poem about the difference between flowers that wilt in the snow and babies that grow and grow. I wish they didn't yell, poop or throw-up. Life would more perfect if god gave them a voice when they became a teenager!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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A sugar=sweet poem about the difference between flowers that wilt in the snow and babies that grow and grow. I wish they didn't yell, poop or throw-up. Life would more perfect if god gave them a voice when they became a teenager!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi K, on my gosh girl , you are in rare form and cracking me up Big Time,
K, l absolutely love your sense of humor and could listen to you all day. Thanks for the chuckles and smiles. I was having a bad flare, and l do feel a little bit better from the laughter. Thank you my sweet & lovely friend!
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Good! There isn't enough laughter in these dark times.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. So true. Starting like little seeds babies grow and push on until they leave the womb. I have never understood how people cannot see a child as anything but a gift from God. Like a spectacular bloom, you can't help but fall in love. Great comparison. Lovely poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Awe. So true. Starting like little seeds babies grow and push on until they leave the womb. I have never understood how people cannot see a child as anything but a gift from God. Like a spectacular bloom, you can't help but fall in love. Great comparison. Lovely poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Hi Gretchen! One of the sermons we listened to this morning was about abortions and I cringe every time I think that there are people in our country who believe it is ok to kill babies. I may have to write another poem about that soon as I feel so strongly about it. Thank you my sweet friend for such lovely words and thoughts. You are such a true friend.
Comment from Karyn2
Lovely words here. So much beautiful truth. Our children needs all the love and nurturing to grow and flourish especially in their faith. And snow is a given... we love snow!!
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Lovely words here. So much beautiful truth. Our children needs all the love and nurturing to grow and flourish especially in their faith. And snow is a given... we love snow!!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
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Thanks so much Sweetheart for such kind words for my poem. I do love both, of course mostly children. Lol! However when we get snow, it isn't always so lovely, but the kids love it. This year twice we have had twenty plus inches dropped on us and what a mess to clear it. Thanks again my dear friend.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"A Child and a flower are gifts from God we know
Thankful for our children who are with us as they grow"
I like your poem and the picture you have chosen. Children certainly are precious gifts from God.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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"A Child and a flower are gifts from God we know
Thankful for our children who are with us as they grow"
I like your poem and the picture you have chosen. Children certainly are precious gifts from God.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Anne, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my dear friend!
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You are welcome, Debi. I have you on my prayer list and hope you are doing well.
Comment from Sally Law
It doesn't get any more beautiful than this! I'm in awe of these babies and the presentation. Such a gift for Me and my waning eyes to behold. Precious, dear Debi! Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the week,
Love,
Sal XOs
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It doesn't get any more beautiful than this! I'm in awe of these babies and the presentation. Such a gift for Me and my waning eyes to behold. Precious, dear Debi! Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the week,
Love,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Sally, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Also for those gracious gifts of stars that you brought to this review! Your kind words are always so appreciated, my very beautiful, wonderful and gracious friend!.
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My pleasure as always. I love you your sweet little blooming poem and you. Be blessed. Sal XOs
Comment from LJbutterfly
Where ever did you find that adorable, precious picture? It fit your poem perfectly. This poem flowed so smoothly, I could almost sing it. Only a poet would see the similarities of a child and flowers. Your comparisons are stunning. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Where ever did you find that adorable, precious picture? It fit your poem perfectly. This poem flowed so smoothly, I could almost sing it. Only a poet would see the similarities of a child and flowers. Your comparisons are stunning. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Lorraine, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my lovely colorful butterfly friend!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A clever comparison and nicely written and presented.
Each verse is imbued with thoughtful contemplation and comparison,
Love is the difference between a child and a flower for we nourish the mind, body and soul of our children for as long as we are able.
Blessings
Shirley
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A clever comparison and nicely written and presented.
Each verse is imbued with thoughtful contemplation and comparison,
Love is the difference between a child and a flower for we nourish the mind, body and soul of our children for as long as we are able.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Shirley, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated, my very dear friend!
Comment from lyenochka
Love your encouragement to love and nurture our children just like flowers need our tender loving care. I especially liked "Stay true to your faith in God in every single stage."
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Love your encouragement to love and nurture our children just like flowers need our tender loving care. I especially liked "Stay true to your faith in God in every single stage."
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Helen, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
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Comment from Mintybee
This is a lovely comparison of children and flowers. The art you chose is great for the topic and tone of the poem. It's a light poem with some deeper wisdom. The rhyme is steady. The rhythm is largely consistent, and the lines that vary feel playful instead of like a lack of care. The compare and contrast structure works well.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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This is a lovely comparison of children and flowers. The art you chose is great for the topic and tone of the poem. It's a light poem with some deeper wisdom. The rhyme is steady. The rhythm is largely consistent, and the lines that vary feel playful instead of like a lack of care. The compare and contrast structure works well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi there Minty, I thank you so very much for having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your review. Your kind words are so appreciated.
Comment from jmdg1954
An excellent with regards to our children and how they are with from before they are born until we are separated.
I feel you can also factor in grandchildren in many of your thoughts.
Very well done, my friend.
John
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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An excellent with regards to our children and how they are with from before they are born until we are separated.
I feel you can also factor in grandchildren in many of your thoughts.
Very well done, my friend.
John
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Hi John, I thank you so very much for always having sweet things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
