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Trial of TBBW

the big bad wolf

7 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I read this with other advocates, and I found this to be clever and creative.
For the first time, I side with the wolf!
A fun, enjoyable and entertaining "trial."
I wish you well in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
    thanks so much, Mary. I didn't know there would be another Big Bad Wolf entry. How funny that you sided with the wolf. That tickles me!
Comment from Thesis
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A different twist on this classic fairytale putting the Wolf on trial, then having his attorney play devil's advocate for him is similar to another post I've read.

I liked how the attorney glossed over the facts and just focused on the happy ending.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    an old defense attorney trick
Comment from jessizero
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This was very amusing. I agree that the Big, Bad Wolf wasn't actually the "bad guy" in this story. His defense did a great job. I am sure he won his case. Thanks, and best wishes.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Jessi, is that you? darling picture. You look different from the other picture. Very pretty, young lady!
    Thank you for your support of the defense! :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
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Well, it sounds as if TBBW has himself a high-flauting lawyer that costs him plenty. I wonder the attorney went to school and how TBBW paid him. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    it's just supposed to be funny.
    Thanks for the good luck.
reply by Mary Shifman on 29-Jan-2023
    You succeeded. It is funny.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    thanks!
reply by Mary Shifman on 01-Feb-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is hilarious and I loved your sense of humour here, this courtroom drama was amusing and clever and this is a fine post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    thanks, Dolly, for your kind comments and for the good wishes!!
Comment from royowen
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This is a very famous, although I suspect it was written by the brothers Grimm, who really write a lot of stories unfit for child literary consumption, this is beautifully written my friend, cleverly thought out. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Yes, Roy, I agree. I never liked the Grimms stories as a child, and as I got older, wondered if they weren't just trying to scare poor little kids. I'd bet they didn't have any. :)
    Anyway, many thanks for your comments.
reply by royowen on 29-Jan-2023
    Well done
Comment from Wils
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I am a fan of courtroom dramas so I was drawn to your story straight away. Would love to have heard the judge's verdict to this case, perhaps found innocent after all these years. Good luck in the contest.
Geoff

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Geoff. That gave me an idea. Maybe I'll start a series of fairy tale sequels. Would be fun.