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An account of total abandonhood.
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Comment from
royowen
I love the symbolism of trees stripped bare. It speaks of the outer garment stripped away and the real person exposed, which, apart from the practicality of clothing is how we really are. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
Thanks my dear friend Roy and I hope you have a most Blessed rest of your day today.
Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 30-Jan-2023
Comment from
susand3022
Hi Ricky,
Looking carefully at the image, I found no signs of trees that had been stripped bare... so I'm taking this metaphorically.
Someone is always listening... you may just not be listening back.
Susan :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
Thanks for your time, review and opinions.
Doctor Ricky 1025
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. This is a good read.
My bodies lying there.. (This confuses me are you literally talking about more than one body, example human body and the spirit body or do you mean 'body's'?)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
This is supposed to represent my pain today because I have no place to live temporarily.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
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