Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

outstanding poem/commentary on a moment in the life of millions that witnessed the horror of war, evil, tenacity, and believe it or not strength and hope. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet,

you did a great job to present both sides ... war is an ugly beast and the bomb killed many innocent lives as you pointed out.

I wrote "Hiroshima" ..you posted just minutes before me ..normally I would have just deleted mine seeing someone else posted the same topic...but I really put much effort into writing my version.

It's not as heartfelt as yours ..yours brings out strongly the emotional side which lacks in mine.

I wish you best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

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reply by tempeste on 30-Jan-2023

Ciao !

I just saw the contest is in the booth.

You have 5 votes now .. seems some entries were disqualified 🙁

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

It think it must be decided if this is prose or poetry. It is listed as prose. Just saying, but the form resembles poetry. Also, consistency of punctuation. Some lines have them, most do not.

The suffering that ensued were the consequences he begat[.]

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023