Redemption Reigns
Complex Alliterisen/Decision7 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the decision contest entry. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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This is a very interesting and very well written poem you have penned for the decision contest entry. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Thank you Teri for reading and for the review! Very much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. How long did it take to dot all the i's and cross all the tee's to hit the mark of an Complex Alliteration. I understand the two sides, but rather doubt I would take to compete in a contest where only C.A.'s are required. Well done.
In other words it would be two much for me to tryð??µâ??ð??«
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Wow. How long did it take to dot all the i's and cross all the tee's to hit the mark of an Complex Alliteration. I understand the two sides, but rather doubt I would take to compete in a contest where only C.A.'s are required. Well done.
In other words it would be two much for me to tryð??µâ??ð??«
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
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Lol well, the poem was actually written before I saw the contest. :) I diving into more complex forms ( for fun lol) thanks for reviewing!
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What did you mean by only C.A?s are required?
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Complex Alliteration
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Lol I think I just misread you reply 😂 no worries
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and you should try it! Actually, it really isn't too bad. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Wow! This is stunning poetry of the war between the devil and the Christian, mystery poet. We have spiritual armor: the helmet of salvation, breastplate of righteousness, sword of the spirit, belt of truth and gospel shoes. Our victory is sure and we will triumph over evil in God's perfect peace. O happy day!
Sensational form and presentation.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Wow! This is stunning poetry of the war between the devil and the Christian, mystery poet. We have spiritual armor: the helmet of salvation, breastplate of righteousness, sword of the spirit, belt of truth and gospel shoes. Our victory is sure and we will triumph over evil in God's perfect peace. O happy day!
Sensational form and presentation.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 30-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Beautifully said! Thank you Sally!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You offer two very different options here, a life of grace or a life of fire and brimstone, I know which I would prefer but the fight still rages outside my door. Both verses are powerful and strong here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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You offer two very different options here, a life of grace or a life of fire and brimstone, I know which I would prefer but the fight still rages outside my door. Both verses are powerful and strong here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Dolly! :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
You are a master at implementing every poetic form that comes your way, making it seem well known to you; and this complicated form is no exception.
Beyond fulfilling all the requirements of the form, it flows smoothly without any wording that seems forced; and the text of each verse fits its theme well. The contrast between the themes of the two stanzas is emphasized by the contrasting colors of each verse's text; and the dual-color symbol between stanzas links them well, as does the title above the poem.
I like both your choice of stanza themes and of the wording in each. As a poem of faith, it is superb and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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You are a master at implementing every poetic form that comes your way, making it seem well known to you; and this complicated form is no exception.
Beyond fulfilling all the requirements of the form, it flows smoothly without any wording that seems forced; and the text of each verse fits its theme well. The contrast between the themes of the two stanzas is emphasized by the contrasting colors of each verse's text; and the dual-color symbol between stanzas links them well, as does the title above the poem.
I like both your choice of stanza themes and of the wording in each. As a poem of faith, it is superb and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023
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Thank you Mike :)
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You are most welcome, Susan.
You have a way with words -- even when there are few of them. :)) -- Mike
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You are most welcome, Susan.
Congratulations on winning Second Place with a difficult poetic form that you mastered as well as so many others, regardless of complexity.
[My earlier reply was meant to go to your other post, but it is still true.]
It's good to see you are finding time to write again. :)) -- Mike
Comment from patcelaw
I think the wording is quite good. Although, I am not sure I understand the formatting. There is wisdom and truth in this poem. I wish the best for you in the contest.
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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I think the wording is quite good. Although, I am not sure I understand the formatting. There is wisdom and truth in this poem. I wish the best for you in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Hi Patricia, thank you for reading and reviewing! Just diving into some more complex forms of poetry... for fun :-)
Comment from Karyn2
WOW! So I'm new to this form of poetry and it certainly seems complex (no wonder it's called complex Alliterisen!) but I truly loved it! THe alliteration is stunning and comparison between two halves is so striking as though it presents 2 sides of the coin for which a decision can be formed. I wish I had a 6 for you and this fine piece.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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WOW! So I'm new to this form of poetry and it certainly seems complex (no wonder it's called complex Alliterisen!) but I truly loved it! THe alliteration is stunning and comparison between two halves is so striking as though it presents 2 sides of the coin for which a decision can be formed. I wish I had a 6 for you and this fine piece.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
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Your stellar review is plenty enough and certainly putting a smile on the face! I've been diving into these more complex forms of poetry. Thank you kindly for appreciating that!
