Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your image is lovely. In the spring, we hear the birds singing their song of six-pence; the wren does have a beautiful song to sing; she lets us know when they have returned home.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Olivanne Marsh

Excellent

Nice...I would say perfect, but nothing ever is, still I can find no fault. Well done. I like the metaphor of a merry bird song that is carried in the heart, it's beautiful and apt.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.

Beautiful presentation and imagery.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thanks so much Gypsy.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Birds are so positive and fill our skies with hope and merriment and I just love the birds. Your few words are joyous and uplifting as bird song in the early morn helps us to wake and embrace the day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thanks so much, Dolly.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

That is a very cheerful poem, with a beautiful presentation. It reminds the reader of the hope and optimism of spring. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you Wendy!

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you Wendy!

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This a beautifully stated entry to the Hope 5-7-5 contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly presented. It is such a lyrical message and is well-done. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you Sandra.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 27-Jan-2023

You are welcome.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you Sandra.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 28-Jan-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

This is an thoughtful and uplifting entry in the 5-7-5 Hope writing contest. The symbolism of a songbird singing paints a perfect picture of hope as performed through its melodic song. Well done.

All the best in the contest,

Eugene

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

I love your imagery in this poem! Hope rarely waits quietly! If one is hoping for something exciting, there is definitely a flutter of heart and jitters of nervous waiting that this little bird signifies. I think this one is brilliant!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thanks so much, Karyn!

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

You have done an excellent job with the writing prompt. I love your choice of words, comparing branches and birds to the human state. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

thanks so much!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is a wonderful Haiku for the 5/7/5 Haiku contest. It makes me want for Spring. Maybe it's just around the corner?

Good luck in the contest. May you have good fortune when the writing muse smiles upon you!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thanks so much!