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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness, I am so sorry to hear this terrible tragedy happened to you and I am relieved your son survived, this is indeed every parents nightmare, thank you for sharing your story, this must have been difficult to write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your excellent five stars review and kind feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad that you shared this story through this flash true story form! It's a story that more people need to know about and understand the trauma that it causes both the students and their parents. Best wishes in the contest!

It's one of the worse nightmares a parent could have. (worst)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    Thank you, big sister, I corrected that error. I thought about it when I wrote it, I should have checked the dictionary, I usually I do.

    Big sister, thank you for the kind and exceptional six stars review.

    Love,

    Gypsy
Comment from Fei Ma
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So...so...sorry, for what happened on that day.
There are many shooting events recently too, ruthless and brutal. And make no sense. Beautiful lives are wasted. So tragic. Condemn all violence.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Fei

    Thank you very much for your time, six star review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am not questioning the tragedy of children being shot. It horrible and needs to stop. What I am wondering is how did this stat come about? "An estimated 4.6 million American children live in a home where at least one gun is kept loaded and unlocked." How does anybody know what is in American homes behind closed doors? If it's one loaded unlocked gun, it's too many, but I am wondering how anybody knows the number.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023 reply by barbara.wilkey on 28-Jan-2023
    That makes sense. Thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023
    You're welcome (*÷*)
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. The picture was perfect for the intent of the article. Your words were wonderful and oh so very true. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Your true story flash is a powerful reminder of the gun violence that infects our society like no other country in the world. It is important that we remain mindful and vigilant. One suggestion: you could change the word "blocked" in the second sentence to "barricaded" for word variety. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Oh my goodness! I am so sorry that your son watched his peers gunned down while he was in the playground! I hope his wounds are healed by now. I cannot imagine this happening to my child even though I don't have any children I can relate to the grief you and your son must have had. I thank you for posting this and for addressing this issue of gun violence in our country, especially the violence in our schools and the locked-down drills they must have to tolerate these sad events in our lives.
Jesse

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you, Jesse, I appreciate your empathy, you are very kind. We both have moved on, my son is a man now ... but who knows, he's very positive and doesn't share his feelings, unless it's really bad. Take care, my friend.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Jesse James Doty on 29-Jan-2023
    You must feel proud to raise a son who becomes a man so positive yet still expresses his feelings. Thanks for calling me your friend. The feeling is mutual. And, thanks for the hugs.
    Jesse
Comment from royowen
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The horrid thing is that this has been going on for years, I don't understand how even assault rifles designed to kill many quickly are tolerated, it's so crazy. Despite much rhetoric nothing is ever manifest. I think it's the only place in the world that it can happen, my sympathy, your son was also a casualty, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    You are right. We have a huge problem in the USA, much worse than other countries. The NRA national riffle association makes big profits, they are concern about big business, not people. It's hard to pass gun control laws in congress and senate.

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 28-Jan-2023
    Jesus said, ?Money creates all kinds of evil.?
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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We see these reports on our nightly news and are thankful that it is not our child. It must have been a day, a nightmare that often rewinds, and unfortunately they are still happening. An emotional story for you to share Gypsy. Sending hugs to you and yours, and hope that your grandson only ever has practice drills.
Valda

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Yes. This is so horrible. We really need to something about this. We need this children, out future. There are so many lately. Man people are unhappy but why do they have to kill so many before leaving this world?

Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs