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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a terribly tragic story and these bulls are dangerous and when you play with fire, you get your fingers burnt. I am so sorry your friend died so young. I am glad your brother changed his career eventually, this is quite a story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
Oh my goodness this is a terribly tragic story and these bulls are dangerous and when you play with fire, you get your fingers burnt. I am so sorry your friend died so young. I am glad your brother changed his career eventually, this is quite a story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I just read a 14 year old died after his die in North Carolina this week.you might could look this accident up.
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I read the story, how very tragic x x x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry,CRW. I enjoyed
reading it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well
about bulls and bull riders in a rodeo. I don't believe many
understand the training and devotion those riders have for
their sport. The ending was sad. I'm happy your brother found
another interest to continue being part of the rodeo.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
You did a great job with your contest entry,CRW. I enjoyed
reading it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well
about bulls and bull riders in a rodeo. I don't believe many
understand the training and devotion those riders have for
their sport. The ending was sad. I'm happy your brother found
another interest to continue being part of the rodeo.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Rodeos are a big sport here where I live. It is not only dangerous for the rider but also for the clowns who have to be quick to get the rider to safety or distract the bull. Glamor always causes people to ignore the danger.
I spotted some mistakes but also noticed someone had already corrected you.
Your content was good.
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
Rodeos are a big sport here where I live. It is not only dangerous for the rider but also for the clowns who have to be quick to get the rider to safety or distract the bull. Glamor always causes people to ignore the danger.
I spotted some mistakes but also noticed someone had already corrected you.
Your content was good.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your support!
Comment from Mary Shifman
I think the idea of participating in rodeo is rather romantic. I guess that notion stems from the fact that when I was a girl the television show, Stony Burke was my favorite. The truth is that I can't imagine making a living by riding bulls or broncos. I know that professions can latch onto you no matter how dangerous they are. My father was a coal miner and he worked in deep mines. It was dangerous in so many ways but he loved it. I'm so sorry that your son's friend was injured and can no longer take part in something he loved.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
I think the idea of participating in rodeo is rather romantic. I guess that notion stems from the fact that when I was a girl the television show, Stony Burke was my favorite. The truth is that I can't imagine making a living by riding bulls or broncos. I know that professions can latch onto you no matter how dangerous they are. My father was a coal miner and he worked in deep mines. It was dangerous in so many ways but he loved it. I'm so sorry that your son's friend was injured and can no longer take part in something he loved.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Yeah I hear where he's coming from my grandpa was like that he did what he loved best.
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Yeah I hear where he's coming from my grandpa was like that he did what he loved best.
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I wish you and yours the best of fortunes.
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, I have been to the rodeo many times. It was very popular when we first moved to Florida. I can't see how anyone would make this a career. I'd rather have a nice ride out in the pasture. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
Yes, I have been to the rodeo many times. It was very popular when we first moved to Florida. I can't see how anyone would make this a career. I'd rather have a nice ride out in the pasture. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I will take horses to than bull riding . I will never ride again but I can write and dream about it.Thank you for your kind support. Xxoo
Comment from lancellot
This is an interesting story, and Bull riding is an exciting sport. I've watched some contests. The post needs major editing. There are lots of errors, SPAG throughout. I've listed some, so you know what to look for and how to edit.
notes"
killing someone one (one) day! (")Mark my words that bull is a killer(.)!"
-remove double word
-remove stray quote mark
-remove period
{spectators,bull} riding is a lot more than just a sport.
- add space between
riders to the bulls that dump their riders {with in} mere seconds.
- within
Growing up wanting be a professional .bull rider, it seems to be every bull riders dream.
-Growing up wanting to be a professional bull rider, seems to be every bull rider's dream.
My brother because of his advanced skill when he turned the age of 18 he turned pro.
-My brother turned pro at the age of eighteen because of his advanced skills.
He quickly rose {up} through the ranks as one of the sports top prospects.
- remove, not needed
Hell,(") they called him a cowboy's cowboy.(")
-remove
He never forgot where he came from when he
made it to the big time and never forgetting his roots.
-He never forgot where he came from when he
made it to the big time.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
This is an interesting story, and Bull riding is an exciting sport. I've watched some contests. The post needs major editing. There are lots of errors, SPAG throughout. I've listed some, so you know what to look for and how to edit.
notes"
killing someone one (one) day! (")Mark my words that bull is a killer(.)!"
-remove double word
-remove stray quote mark
-remove period
{spectators,bull} riding is a lot more than just a sport.
- add space between
riders to the bulls that dump their riders {with in} mere seconds.
- within
Growing up wanting be a professional .bull rider, it seems to be every bull riders dream.
-Growing up wanting to be a professional bull rider, seems to be every bull rider's dream.
My brother because of his advanced skill when he turned the age of 18 he turned pro.
-My brother turned pro at the age of eighteen because of his advanced skills.
He quickly rose {up} through the ranks as one of the sports top prospects.
- remove, not needed
Hell,(") they called him a cowboy's cowboy.(")
-remove
He never forgot where he came from when he
made it to the big time and never forgetting his roots.
-He never forgot where he came from when he
made it to the big time.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Think I fixed
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. My uncle is a member of the Rodeo Hall of Fame. He rode the bulls. I enjoyed reading your entry, but you need some editing. Please take time to do that.
Growing up wanting be a professional .bull rider, ('wanting TO be' & not sure why the period is before 'bull)
My brother because of his advanced skill when he turned the age of 18he turned pro. (space after 18, but in writing it should be eighteen. You could also say 'when he turned eighteen, turned pro.)
In reality , rodeos are are nothing more than manipulative displays of human domination over animals disguised as entertainment.they are a cowboys livelihood and in (delete space after 'reality', delete one 'are' & space after period and capital 't' on 'They' & there are many places you need a period and a space and a capital letter.)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. My uncle is a member of the Rodeo Hall of Fame. He rode the bulls. I enjoyed reading your entry, but you need some editing. Please take time to do that.
Growing up wanting be a professional .bull rider, ('wanting TO be' & not sure why the period is before 'bull)
My brother because of his advanced skill when he turned the age of 18he turned pro. (space after 18, but in writing it should be eighteen. You could also say 'when he turned eighteen, turned pro.)
In reality , rodeos are are nothing more than manipulative displays of human domination over animals disguised as entertainment.they are a cowboys livelihood and in (delete space after 'reality', delete one 'are' & space after period and capital 't' on 'They' & there are many places you need a period and a space and a capital letter.)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great story. Interesting topic that you wrote about. I enjoyed reading this. It's sad that he got stepped on by the bull and died. That is a terrible freak accident. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
Great story. Interesting topic that you wrote about. I enjoyed reading this. It's sad that he got stepped on by the bull and died. That is a terrible freak accident. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank younfirbyourvduppirt.
Comment from Terry Broxson
I enjoyed your story about bull riding. You provide some nice insights into the 'sport' that was new to me. There is no question they are dangerous. Your brother going into calf roping sounds like a wise decision. Good work. Terry
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
I enjoyed your story about bull riding. You provide some nice insights into the 'sport' that was new to me. There is no question they are dangerous. Your brother going into calf roping sounds like a wise decision. Good work. Terry
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thanknyounfotnyourvsuppirt
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story. Good info presented.
depending what mood you bull is in. - ('your', or 'the')
18he turned pro. - spacing
rare.most bull riders were born into it. - space and cap
when he
made it to the big time - spacing
There are other spacing issues in the piece.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
Nice story. Good info presented.
depending what mood you bull is in. - ('your', or 'the')
18he turned pro. - spacing
rare.most bull riders were born into it. - space and cap
when he
made it to the big time - spacing
There are other spacing issues in the piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your kind support.