Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was beautiful. The picture was beautiful and your words were beautiful, Gypsy. This was a great modern haiku. It was perfect for your words. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

A lovely haiku, I am not familiar with the modern haiku and appreciated your notes. It seems the satori is presented first then the supporting point comes later. I will have to study yours a little closer :). Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

The satori can come at the beginning or the end. In Japan, sometimes they write a one line haiku with a satori incorporated to it. I have seen it in English too. I think it's more changeling. You can click on the link to see a few.

the haiku foundation.org-one line haiku I try to expand the possibilities of haiku but there are many on our fanstory who can't go beyond the 5/7/5 mold. ...sigh... lol

Gypsy hugs

Thank you very much, my friend.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The love planted within us at home follows us wherever we go. I liked that thought as I read this poem. The cherry blossoms just enhance that love. Thank you for sharing this with complete package with us.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Happy weekend!

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

What a cheerful poem about a beautiful heart for your family. I love the use of cherry blossom to express love. Also it's fun to see your using the last two lines for satori.

Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Happy weekend!

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written Modern Haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Happy weekend!

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

"A heart full of blossoms" makes me think of a heart full of hope. Even though the narrator is leaving home, the seeds of love from home life are blossoming within.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Yes, exactly (*÷*)

Thank you , big sis, love.

Marival ❤️

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your modern haiku poem- good picture presentation and flow- good concept- blossoms leaving the tree - taking with them memories of life- nice Good Job AP

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Happy weekend!

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a beautifully stated modern haiku. The text is a great size, and I love it being different colors. The message is clearly stated. The presentation is stunning. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

Ms Sandy

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Happy weekend!

Gypsy hugs

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 27-Jan-2023

Wishing you the same. You are welcome.