Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "In the Meantime"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
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Comment from lancellot
Written well and the format is perfect. I did wonder why the white text background. It doesn't distract, but it was used throughout. Perhaps, it has meaning?
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I suggest looking into over narrating. This can lead to telling much of the story rather than showing.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Written well and the format is perfect. I did wonder why the white text background. It doesn't distract, but it was used throughout. Perhaps, it has meaning?
Note:
I suggest looking into over narrating. This can lead to telling much of the story rather than showing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your involved review.
