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An account of total abandonhood.

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Comment from Brandon Clark
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This reads and looks well, no revisions needed that I could spot. Nice job on this and sends a good message as well. I'll be interested to see the next chapter, for sure. Thanks for sharing it with us!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    Thanks again Brandon Clark for reviewing my works.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Here is another of your emotion-packed writings, Ricky. Again, I can feel the emotion behind and between each and every word. You do a marvelous job of writing, my friend.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023
    This will intensify as the court date on February 8th, approaches.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I just read this and posted a review for it. I think you accidentally posted it twice. You may want to check it. Strange things happened to me when I was posting today too.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
    Yes,
    Confusing times.
    Sorry,
    Doctor Ricky