Life's Lesson
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Lust is not the same as love. You may have an intense attraction for another person, but you may not love them. Love is a feeling that is very deep.
If you or someone you know is struggling with lust or sexual addiction, it's important to get help. Addiction of any sort can affect your mental health, and while sex may not take the same physical toll on the body that some addictions exert, it still can be harmful.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Lust is not the same as love. You may have an intense attraction for another person, but you may not love them. Love is a feeling that is very deep.
If you or someone you know is struggling with lust or sexual addiction, it's important to get help. Addiction of any sort can affect your mental health, and while sex may not take the same physical toll on the body that some addictions exert, it still can be harmful.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
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The latter paragraph I posted from the internet. I thought it was interesting.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- on one of the deadly sins- lust- short and to the point- nice - and very true in reality- without it to some degree there would - without doubt -be fewer people- primal instinct- nice job-AP
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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I like your poem- on one of the deadly sins- lust- short and to the point- nice - and very true in reality- without it to some degree there would - without doubt -be fewer people- primal instinct- nice job-AP
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much,
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This deadly sin poem seems incomplete. I like the size of the text and the alliterative one line. However, it begs for expansion. If you wrote only four or five more ideas, it would read more as a completed poem. Also, some color would help the presentation. I cannot imagine lust as being gray. Perhaps, red lettering on yellow like fire would add to your one-line poem. A visual would also enhance the presentation too. You need to give the audience more to digest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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This deadly sin poem seems incomplete. I like the size of the text and the alliterative one line. However, it begs for expansion. If you wrote only four or five more ideas, it would read more as a completed poem. Also, some color would help the presentation. I cannot imagine lust as being gray. Perhaps, red lettering on yellow like fire would add to your one-line poem. A visual would also enhance the presentation too. You need to give the audience more to digest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not sure lust has this kind of power, but excitement can tease us into temptation and once we succumb we may have regrets and shame on our hands, you made me smile here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Not sure lust has this kind of power, but excitement can tease us into temptation and once we succumb we may have regrets and shame on our hands, you made me smile here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you, it was written for smiles
Comment from Kaiku
This is really quite funny and to some degree- true. I was looking for your entry and it was staring right at me. I thought maybe the 4 word poem was the title then I realized what you had done and just burst out laughing. Good for you.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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This is really quite funny and to some degree- true. I was looking for your entry and it was staring right at me. I thought maybe the 4 word poem was the title then I realized what you had done and just burst out laughing. Good for you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I had to wait for the prompt to open before I could reply "blind"
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😂
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On your comments about looking for the poem, I added some color, I hope this is OK.
Comment from TDLRasmar
I'm giving you five stars because I got a good laugh out of your poem and I really don't want to say why. It is just that lust and lubrication in the same sentence does paint a certain image. Or should I just get my mind out of the gutter.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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I'm giving you five stars because I got a good laugh out of your poem and I really don't want to say why. It is just that lust and lubrication in the same sentence does paint a certain image. Or should I just get my mind out of the gutter.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, it was written for smiles
Comment from royowen
I guess these lustful emotions must speed up and give a boost to the world's population, and not only that, but the nation thst I live in also, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessing Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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I guess these lustful emotions must speed up and give a boost to the world's population, and not only that, but the nation thst I live in also, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessing Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much
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