My Angels Heart
The gifts she gave me,49 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is a beautiful tribute to the love and memories of a family. The imagery of a garden of love, with petals representing each member, is a poignant and powerful metaphor. The speaker's loss is palpable, but the reminder of the love and care of their "darling" brings a sense of comfort. The attention to detail, such as the unique petals being compared to snowflakes, adds depth and emotion to the poem. Overall, the poem is a moving and heartfelt tribute to the importance of family.
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This poem is a beautiful tribute to the love and memories of a family. The imagery of a garden of love, with petals representing each member, is a poignant and powerful metaphor. The speaker's loss is palpable, but the reminder of the love and care of their "darling" brings a sense of comfort. The attention to detail, such as the unique petals being compared to snowflakes, adds depth and emotion to the poem. Overall, the poem is a moving and heartfelt tribute to the importance of family.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from harmony13
The poem is beautiful! The author's describes a garden of love sent from above with exceptional beauty! Thank you for the author's notes - so
wonderful that you have four children, I like the way the author expresses the petals as part of his Angel's Heart. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
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The poem is beautiful! The author's describes a garden of love sent from above with exceptional beauty! Thank you for the author's notes - so
wonderful that you have four children, I like the way the author expresses the petals as part of his Angel's Heart. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
What a beautiful poem in tribute to your wife and children. The text is a great size. The message is poignant and clearly stated. Anyone with cherished family would respect and relate to your sentiments. Your rhyme scheme is on point.
I only would suggest you drop the first line down one space from underneath the family photo for better presentation. The visual of course is perfect because it is your loved one. Thanks for sharing.
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What a beautiful poem in tribute to your wife and children. The text is a great size. The message is poignant and clearly stated. Anyone with cherished family would respect and relate to your sentiments. Your rhyme scheme is on point.
I only would suggest you drop the first line down one space from underneath the family photo for better presentation. The visual of course is perfect because it is your loved one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
Comment from karenina
To honor your loved one in poetry is to keep her memory alive! How blessed your children, to have such a loving mother...
She is always with you...
Bless your family!
Karenina
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To honor your loved one in poetry is to keep her memory alive! How blessed your children, to have such a loving mother...
She is always with you...
Bless your family!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
"My darling brought the flowers to my door."
Just beautiful!
If you still have the flowers, you still have the giver. She will always be with you.
Nice work.
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"My darling brought the flowers to my door."
Just beautiful!
If you still have the flowers, you still have the giver. She will always be with you.
Nice work.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
What a super photo of your family.
I enjoyed reading this.
It sounds like the much-loved wife has passed beyond, but how kind to include her role as such a major part of the poem. Hope we all get a garden of love like that in the eternities.
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What a super photo of your family.
I enjoyed reading this.
It sounds like the much-loved wife has passed beyond, but how kind to include her role as such a major part of the poem. Hope we all get a garden of love like that in the eternities.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, so sweet and touching. What a beautiful garden and blessings of God representated here. Our children carry a piece of us into the future. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal XOs
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Ah, so sweet and touching. What a beautiful garden and blessings of God representated here. Our children carry a piece of us into the future. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 25-Jan-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The picture was beautiful--a family to be proud of, Willie.
I enjoyed reading your tribute to your wife and children.
Your words were well thought out, they were descriptive,
and flowed smoothly with a great little story. The rhymes
were used well, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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The picture was beautiful--a family to be proud of, Willie.
I enjoyed reading your tribute to your wife and children.
Your words were well thought out, they were descriptive,
and flowed smoothly with a great little story. The rhymes
were used well, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
Comment from Faith Williams
I really like the metaphor of your children as your garden. Love the line, 'Each petal different as a flake of snow.' Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
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I really like the metaphor of your children as your garden. Love the line, 'Each petal different as a flake of snow.' Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
