My Angels Heart
The gifts she gave me,49 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Willie,
I hope you copy this poem and send/give it to each of your children.
Such beautiful affirmation of love for the four of them and your dear wife.
I feel the very same way about our son and daughter... and now my two little grandsons!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Hello, Willie,
I hope you copy this poem and send/give it to each of your children.
Such beautiful affirmation of love for the four of them and your dear wife.
I feel the very same way about our son and daughter... and now my two little grandsons!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely poem. I really like the metaphors of flower petals representing your children, and your children as a part of their mother's heart. Lovely imagery. Although I write different types of poetry, I too, am partial to poems that rhyme. Nicely done.
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This is a lovely poem. I really like the metaphors of flower petals representing your children, and your children as a part of their mother's heart. Lovely imagery. Although I write different types of poetry, I too, am partial to poems that rhyme. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet and lovely poem. You are blessed to have such a wonderful "garden." I love the metaphor. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was such a sweet and lovely poem. You are blessed to have such a wonderful "garden." I love the metaphor. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from godlucifer
the love you have for your family is undeniable. you cherish your family with all aspect from the past,present,and future. the bond you have for your family is a joy of accomplishment. your poem was a rhyme to remember and it was a joyful write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
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the love you have for your family is undeniable. you cherish your family with all aspect from the past,present,and future. the bond you have for your family is a joy of accomplishment. your poem was a rhyme to remember and it was a joyful write. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is a beautiful and loving tribute to the memory of the love of your life. Your reference to your children as your garden is poetic and heartwarming. Your children's picture is stunning. I know you are proud.
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This poem is a beautiful and loving tribute to the memory of the love of your life. Your reference to your children as your garden is poetic and heartwarming. Your children's picture is stunning. I know you are proud.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from susand3022
I loved this, Willie,
What a great comparison. Your family to your flower garden. (I have a couple I'd like to weed out! ... Maybe I could hit them with some kind of anti-nasty spray! lol)
I do love that analogy, it was really sweet.
Susan :)
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I loved this, Willie,
What a great comparison. Your family to your flower garden. (I have a couple I'd like to weed out! ... Maybe I could hit them with some kind of anti-nasty spray! lol)
I do love that analogy, it was really sweet.
Susan :)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sweet words for your family here Willie and I enjoyed your tribute to your four children who you have nurtured and they now nurture you, love the sentiments here, love Dolly x
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Sweet words for your family here Willie and I enjoyed your tribute to your four children who you have nurtured and they now nurture you, love the sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This is a good love story for your wife who loved and cared for her family while she was alive and her love still felt though she isn't physically present.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This is a good love story for your wife who loved and cared for her family while she was alive and her love still felt though she isn't physically present.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
Willie, you have written a beautiful poem, and what's great about it is that you have had the opportunity to share it with them. We never had children, so I don't know your pride from personal experience, but I do know it from your writing. Excellent. Terry.
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Willie, you have written a beautiful poem, and what's great about it is that you have had the opportunity to share it with them. We never had children, so I don't know your pride from personal experience, but I do know it from your writing. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
Comment from Kaiku
Boy, ain`t that the truth. To be blessed with children we can be proud of is quite the pleasure. Succinct and well stated, your poem is very nice and tender.
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Boy, ain`t that the truth. To be blessed with children we can be proud of is quite the pleasure. Succinct and well stated, your poem is very nice and tender.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2023
