Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, the introductions go on and it seems that Med would be the right one to "speak through." Then they could rationalize the experience. The best part is that Ned is the one who really knows what's going on.

the center to address those assembly. (assembled - or -those in the assembly)

Hed and Med rush out to the left while Med (Hed and Fed?)

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Fixed this too.

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Poor Med, no wonder everyone thinks he's out of his mind... no wonder he IS out of his mind!
Do you keep all these characters on cards on a wall or something to keep them all straight?
Susan :)

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

I actually started with Ned and then went alphabetically: Bed sleeps a lot, DED is death, Fed eats a lot, GED is General Equivalency Dude and Ned's smarter clone, Hed is intelligent, Led is a bible thumper, Med is drug seller, Ped likes walking all the time Red used to be a mean cousin and is now D-red, DED's assistant, and Zed was one of the bald guys, with dark glasses, and is now D-zed, DED's other assistant.

reply by susand3022 on 24-Jan-2023

lolol... I'd never be able to keep it all straight, even though I can see the logic! I love that you made Fed a pig. lol

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Well it all seems to me that the writer of this piece may suffering some kind of psychotic break. Too much of this kind of thing can be harmful to one's mental health and lead to an addiction to drugs and other things. I think that you might need some supervision, soon.

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

That why I have the character Med. He's got the good stuff.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

i have to give you credit for being able to keep all these sound alike named characters apart. Very nice job. keep safe and healthy in the new year.

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Thanks, Earl

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

You certainly have enough colorful characters in this hat store. Poor Med! How awful to have your body possessed by these entities that need to speak. Now everyong thinks he's having a nervous breakdown. I wonder which one Ded will leave with today and if he plans to create some new apprentices like he did with Red and Zed.

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

I'm taking out one of the (spoiler alert)!!!

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I haven't read any of the previous posts regarding this script so what I can say is that it moved quickly, you gave direction through the script and I certainly enjoyed the play on names.

Well scripted. John

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Thanks, John.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the idea of these guys being overtaken by these demons and conversing thorough them, Bill, I find this mix of characters, and there's a few of them, beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023

Thank you, Roy.

reply by royowen on 24-Jan-2023

Well done Bill,