Fill Your Life With Poetry
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Comment from jenintorre
Yes I truly agree with all your wonderful words in this poem. Poetry is such a fabulous thing and yours is exceptional Jaybird. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes. Jen,
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Yes I truly agree with all your wonderful words in this poem. Poetry is such a fabulous thing and yours is exceptional Jaybird. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes. Jen,
Comment Written 23-Jan-2023
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are delightful and filled with hope for everyone.
The author expresses well how family and friends have helped him
through life and gave comfort. The poem flows and connects well. Thank
you for the author notes - great advise is given! Great Poem, Jay!
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The author's words are delightful and filled with hope for everyone.
The author expresses well how family and friends have helped him
through life and gave comfort. The poem flows and connects well. Thank
you for the author notes - great advise is given! Great Poem, Jay!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Great poem that tells us readers so much about you as a person. It is always interesting to find out what led people to poetry. Thankyou for serving in WWII. A beautiful poem and may you write many more as I thoroughly enjoyed your words.
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Great poem that tells us readers so much about you as a person. It is always interesting to find out what led people to poetry. Thankyou for serving in WWII. A beautiful poem and may you write many more as I thoroughly enjoyed your words.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Faith Williams
Writing poetry and putting words to thoughts and feelings does indeed bring fulfillment and lifts one's spirit. I particularly liked your closing line, 'Until my time on earth is through, I must go on, with what I do.' Thanks so much for sharing.
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Writing poetry and putting words to thoughts and feelings does indeed bring fulfillment and lifts one's spirit. I particularly liked your closing line, 'Until my time on earth is through, I must go on, with what I do.' Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent rhyming poem with a nice presentation. I like the style and theme. Well done my friend. I wish you well with your writing. You always do a great job.
gypsy
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Excellent rhyming poem with a nice presentation. I like the style and theme. Well done my friend. I wish you well with your writing. You always do a great job.
gypsy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a very neatly done matter-of-fact paced piece of work. It was a very enjoyable read.
Keep on writing because you are very good!
Thank you, Sir!
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This is a very neatly done matter-of-fact paced piece of work. It was a very enjoyable read.
Keep on writing because you are very good!
Thank you, Sir!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Another amazing write. Your poem has a great flow and rhyme scheme. thank my Lord, for all those years,
that led me through those doubts and fears.
Until my time on earth is through,I must go on, with what I do. You are an excellent poet. Very nicely done.
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This is Another amazing write. Your poem has a great flow and rhyme scheme. thank my Lord, for all those years,
that led me through those doubts and fears.
Until my time on earth is through,I must go on, with what I do. You are an excellent poet. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words were great to read. I enjoyed reading them.
I liked the use of rhyme and the smooth flow. You gave
readers much to think about why you write poetry.
Thank you for your service.
Take care, Jan
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Your words were great to read. I enjoyed reading them.
I liked the use of rhyme and the smooth flow. You gave
readers much to think about why you write poetry.
Thank you for your service.
Take care, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
Your poetry is fulfilling to those of us who read it as well snd with this one we learn a little bit more about you which is very nice.
Well done Jay.
Blessings
Janet
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Your poetry is fulfilling to those of us who read it as well snd with this one we learn a little bit more about you which is very nice.
Well done Jay.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
Comment from lyenochka
So glad that you are sharing your poetry here, Jaybird!! Thank you for all that you have done serving our country! I'm glad that the classes you took got you more into writing poetry!
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So glad that you are sharing your poetry here, Jaybird!! Thank you for all that you have done serving our country! I'm glad that the classes you took got you more into writing poetry!
The G I BILLwith cources taken, (The GI BILL with courses taken,)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
