Dulcius Ex Asperis
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "DEA - Six"A sequel to my debut novel, Par Angusta Ad Augusta
2 total reviews
Comment from Jessica Nohavicka
I thought that this piece was well put together and very well written. I can tell that this story has a message and the characters are well rounded in the story.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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I thought that this piece was well put together and very well written. I can tell that this story has a message and the characters are well rounded in the story.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from prettybluebirds
In your first paragraph, you wrote Now, now opportunities. I think you meant to write (new). Your story is cute and creative. I like the addition of the dog attempting to remove his cat ears.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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In your first paragraph, you wrote Now, now opportunities. I think you meant to write (new). Your story is cute and creative. I like the addition of the dog attempting to remove his cat ears.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you kindly.
