A Kiss From My Angel
A flight in fantasy with my angel.10 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is very beautiful. The dreaminess of the lines was consistent throughout the whole poem. I loved reading it. I especially loved the fourth stanza. The images are so compelling and so beautiful. A splendid job, and I'm sure this will do well in the contest, though I haven't read them all yet, MM
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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This is very beautiful. The dreaminess of the lines was consistent throughout the whole poem. I loved reading it. I especially loved the fourth stanza. The images are so compelling and so beautiful. A splendid job, and I'm sure this will do well in the contest, though I haven't read them all yet, MM
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, MissMerri. :) I'm glad you like the dreaminess flight of fantasy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Angels are definitely people that you love or have loved. Angels are people who have passed away and you feel their present spiritually. I like your poem; it displays peace in a special way.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Angels are definitely people that you love or have loved. Angels are people who have passed away and you feel their present spiritually. I like your poem; it displays peace in a special way.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Rosemary. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from karenina
Your poem, more than all the other entries, lulled me into that "never-land" of dreams where all things are possible and our hearts are free to soar. Your abab rhyme scheme is consistent and unforced.
If I had any suggestion it would be:
"I sense that loving will soon be,"
could be
I sense that loving soon will be
(It's purely a matter of flow, to me ~ but in all cases I bow to the poet's finest sense!)
You get my vote.
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Your poem, more than all the other entries, lulled me into that "never-land" of dreams where all things are possible and our hearts are free to soar. Your abab rhyme scheme is consistent and unforced.
If I had any suggestion it would be:
"I sense that loving will soon be,"
could be
I sense that loving soon will be
(It's purely a matter of flow, to me ~ but in all cases I bow to the poet's finest sense!)
You get my vote.
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Karenina. :) I'm glad you joined me on the flight of fantasy. I do like your suggestion.
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Great! Every now and them I come up with something...
:)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh my, how romantic, and so evocative -- you paint beautiful pictures in the mind with this lovely fantasy poem. I loved every word, but those last two stanzas are my favorite.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Oh my, how romantic, and so evocative -- you paint beautiful pictures in the mind with this lovely fantasy poem. I loved every word, but those last two stanzas are my favorite.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Ideasaregems-Dawn. :) I'm glad you loved it.
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Usually you write of being haunted by dark things at night, so this is a switch for you. I like, "her light is like a gentle gleam that strokes the beauty of my art", as it says that light and goodness are influencing your words.
The line "they guard our fight from high above" - do you mean to say "flight"?
A lovely dream - so glad you were able to write it down and share it with us.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Usually you write of being haunted by dark things at night, so this is a switch for you. I like, "her light is like a gentle gleam that strokes the beauty of my art", as it says that light and goodness are influencing your words.
The line "they guard our fight from high above" - do you mean to say "flight"?
A lovely dream - so glad you were able to write it down and share it with us.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Pam. :) I'm a dreamer and have many stories that I may share. I corrected the error.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Dreaming writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Dreaming writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Teri. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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You are so welcome! Blessings, teri
Comment from JT traveller
Great entry. Fantastic use of imagery to give us reading an insight into your dreams. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Good luck with the competition. Thankyou.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Great entry. Fantastic use of imagery to give us reading an insight into your dreams. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Good luck with the competition. Thankyou.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Jacqueline. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
My favorite kind of poetry is five to six stanzas and easy to read. This poem fits perfectly. The poem is soft, with meaning and from the heart. I hope it is appreciated. You get a six from me. Willie
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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My favorite kind of poetry is five to six stanzas and easy to read. This poem fits perfectly. The poem is soft, with meaning and from the heart. I hope it is appreciated. You get a six from me. Willie
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Willie. :) If you liked it other may want to dream. I'm happy. Thank you for the stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine tribute, well rhymed with a wonderful flow and I just floated on your words here and this poem would be wonderful in a greetings card, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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This is a fine tribute, well rhymed with a wonderful flow and I just floated on your words here and this poem would be wonderful in a greetings card, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
You're really good with those romance poems, Jose! I hope you read this to your wife. It could refer to her as well as to your muse who directs you to write. It's in our "dreaming" stage that we're the most creative. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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You're really good with those romance poems, Jose! I hope you read this to your wife. It could refer to her as well as to your muse who directs you to write. It's in our "dreaming" stage that we're the most creative. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Helen, thank you. :) Without the love of my angels I would be no one. I'm glad you liked it.
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We're all in the same boat, Jose!