Tanka Collection
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When you bite into a strawberry it does give a redness; produces a juicy, tasty flavor. I like the poem's words and your images. The shape of a strawberry does resemble a heart shape.
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When you bite into a strawberry it does give a redness; produces a juicy, tasty flavor. I like the poem's words and your images. The shape of a strawberry does resemble a heart shape.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Very nicely done!
As usual, you paint well with your words.
I love how your words drip to the next line, telling a sad story.
Thank you for the images.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Very nicely done!
As usual, you paint well with your words.
I love how your words drip to the next line, telling a sad story.
Thank you for the images.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem is scrumptious. I am thinking of those berries and how the juice is spilling onto the plum-colored paper. Then the pivot changes from the fruit to the aching heart and the font color changes with it. Well done!!
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Your poem is scrumptious. I am thinking of those berries and how the juice is spilling onto the plum-colored paper. Then the pivot changes from the fruit to the aching heart and the font color changes with it. Well done!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
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I'm so happy you like it 💓
Thank you very much, Big Sister. Love. Marival ❤️
Comment from prettybluebirds
Thanks for sharing the interesting information in this writing. Your poetry is drop-dead gorgeous, as usual. I love the picture you added to this one. This is skillfully penned.
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Thanks for sharing the interesting information in this writing. Your poetry is drop-dead gorgeous, as usual. I love the picture you added to this one. This is skillfully penned.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from JT traveller
Gypsy, you never fail to impress. Your artistic flair is exceptional. Another fine read with great flow. What a creative person you are. Another poem that was a joy to read.
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Gypsy, you never fail to impress. Your artistic flair is exceptional. Another fine read with great flow. What a creative person you are. Another poem that was a joy to read.
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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