Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Dripping Berry Juice"Romantic Tanka Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....sexually suggestive, or maybe that's just my perverted take on it and you're absolutely disgusted with me right now, appalled even!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....sexually suggestive, or maybe that's just my perverted take on it and you're absolutely disgusted with me right now, appalled even!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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LoL. You are right. :)
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words and the excellent five stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Living a parallel world of writing, whilst dreaming of the all too real sensations of opulent living. The simplest actions such as eating should always be savoured, there is no guarantee they will last in these troubled times. Live to xxx, rather than xxx to live. kay
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Living a parallel world of writing, whilst dreaming of the all too real sensations of opulent living. The simplest actions such as eating should always be savoured, there is no guarantee they will last in these troubled times. Live to xxx, rather than xxx to live. kay
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Marival, I loved this tanka very much. It has so many imaginary flavours, it set off my taste buds. It's beautifully written and I liked the colourful presentation. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Oh, Marival, I loved this tanka very much. It has so many imaginary flavours, it set off my taste buds. It's beautifully written and I liked the colourful presentation. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Gracias, guapa. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, after reading I sit here is awe of your talent. You're amazing and each time I read I am more amazed. I don't have any sixes left. For that I am very sorry. I do hope many reviewers.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Once again, after reading I sit here is awe of your talent. You're amazing and each time I read I am more amazed. I don't have any sixes left. For that I am very sorry. I do hope many reviewers.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Your posts always are presented as works of art - the way you use your image, background colors, font style and color, and additional images on occasion - all add to your creation.
I can see the poet eating and dripping juice onto the words that she writes while yearning for something more.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Your posts always are presented as works of art - the way you use your image, background colors, font style and color, and additional images on occasion - all add to your creation.
I can see the poet eating and dripping juice onto the words that she writes while yearning for something more.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading this - I really like the word pulp, how it relates to both paper and fruit.
The poet's mournful words are dripping onto and bleeding into the paper, just like the berry juice. Lovely imagery and beautifully presented.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading this - I really like the word pulp, how it relates to both paper and fruit.
The poet's mournful words are dripping onto and bleeding into the paper, just like the berry juice. Lovely imagery and beautifully presented.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
A fabulous post dear Gypsy, you have written a great poem here, nobody is quite as good as you for writing these fantastic tanka poems, my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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A fabulous post dear Gypsy, you have written a great poem here, nobody is quite as good as you for writing these fantastic tanka poems, my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Roy,
Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the images of three strawberries as three red drops of a broken heart. Only after reading your, I can imagine they are hears not just berries.
This deserve a six star but I run out.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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I like the images of three strawberries as three red drops of a broken heart. Only after reading your, I can imagine they are hears not just berries.
This deserve a six star but I run out.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem - good picture presentation - interesting information about homemade paper - something that most wouldn't know about. Don't remember ever coming across this over the years, would be interesting to know more and how it was done. Poems paints a cute picture about the poet dripping her berry juice on her poem...lol. Obviously caught up in thought - yearning - red drops of a broken heart - nice
Good Job. AP
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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I like your tanka poem - good picture presentation - interesting information about homemade paper - something that most wouldn't know about. Don't remember ever coming across this over the years, would be interesting to know more and how it was done. Poems paints a cute picture about the poet dripping her berry juice on her poem...lol. Obviously caught up in thought - yearning - red drops of a broken heart - nice
Good Job. AP
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an animated write and I could feel that juice running down my chin as I was reading and the taste of sweet berries can also feel bitter when our heart is broken, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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This is an animated write and I could feel that juice running down my chin as I was reading and the taste of sweet berries can also feel bitter when our heart is broken, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
