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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from leather
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I like the picture and the smile that goes with it--assuming that's you. The color of the shirt matches the text and moves the eye from one to the other. Life is yet to be lived, and I'm glad you are on FanStory.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    That's me in the Ocean Club Hotel Casinos in Atlantic City, New Jersey.
    Note:
    "The depth of the Soul is only as shallow as its Pain"
    Thanks,
    Unknown Poet
    Doctor Ricky1024

    "Still Preaching to the Choir Here at Fanstory
Comment from JT traveller
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What a heartfelt lament. So beautifully composed and extremely emotive. I am so sorry for your loss. I can feel the hurt in your words. The manner in which you express your feelings is unique. Never change.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    Note:
    "The Depth of the Human Soul is only as shall as its Pain"
    Unknown Poet.
    Doctor Ricky1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir Here at Fanstory "
    And, thanks Jacqueline!
    Have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday!
Comment from poetwatch
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Hey, Ricky, what you think? Death coming to get you? Know my friend he haunts my soul but I'm not letting go. As far as can see my life belongs to Our Heavenly Father and His Son. So look death in his empty sockets and tell him to buzz off. Take care, my friend.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    Ha, Ha Ha!
    The Last and second d time?
    I went to Hell to face the Dark Lord.
    I spat in Satan's Face!
    December 1st, 2006
    An attempted Suicide with a 7 inch Serated steak knife into my Chest twice.(hit the Heart valve)
    Then sliced the side of my next thrice(not very nice?)
    Praying to God to hit the Fucking Juggler!
    (Missed of course)
    Then Satan said to me...
    'Never come back to my Hell, ever again!'
    Wrll my question to you Poet.
    If your not welcome in Hell then where the Hell Are You?
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Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is a great piece, Ricky. However, it seems your life has been full of tragedy and despair. I wish you all the best and keep on writing. We all know it helps with the mind and the soul. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    Thanks John for stopping by and reviewing my pain.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Death is certain in our lives. Jesus prepared our path for us. I know death of loved ones is always hard, but we can have comfort knowing they're with God.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    Thanks Barbara for loving by and sharing my pain and misery.
    Comment noted and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday!
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