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One Night Stand

5 Line Poem Contest Entry

8 total reviews 
Comment from moonsunrise
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The image you selected for your five-line poem is perfect.
Very nicely written poem entitled "One Night Stand".
Kudos!
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2023
    Thank you! This was fun to write and I'm glad you liked it. This is pure fantasy. HAHA! Much appreciated. Have a great week.
reply by moonsunrise on 31-Jan-2023
    Your so welcome. Have a wonderful week as well.
Comment from JT traveller
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Very seductive poem and a perfectly chosen illustration to complete the story. A thoroughly enjoyable read and best of luck in the competition. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
    Thank you, Jacqueline, for this great review. This is purely me fantasizing about doing something when I was younger that I was never brave enough to do. HAHA! This was fun to write and I'm glad that not only did you like this, you totally 'get it'. Much appreciated! Lynda
reply by JT traveller on 21-Jan-2023
    My pleasure. I loved your poem.
Comment from poetwatch
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I'm ready to sail unto those unchartered lands, Linda. :) That is a lovely picture, a dream in every sailor's eye. Where have you been woman? I hope you're fine and doing good. This is a very good entry for the 5 Line Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Hi! Yeah, I've taken a bit of a sabbatical from this place. Thank you for this great review. This was fun to write and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. A bit of a fantasy all around, eh? lol Good to hear from you!
Comment from DragonSkulls
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Lol. Sweet. Awesome entry with this heading crossing. Who wouldn't love that? Hehe. Perfect last line and equally perfect picture to accompany your words, Lynda. I hope you come out on top with this one. Pun intended. Lol. I haven't seen anything new from you in a long while so hopefully this six will entice you as much as your tall, sleek ship attracts the sailors. lol. Glad you're back. I wish you the best of luck with this great piece, Lynda.

:)

Ron

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Wow. Thanks for this awesome review. Love all those stars. Much appreciated. Yes, been gone for a while. Can't believe I returned with this. lol It was fun to write and I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Yeah, that's trouble. Young and tender, tan and lovely the girl from Ipanima ... whoops, that's a different tune. All the same result.., trouble.

I liked your poem. Very creative.

Cheers. John

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Yes, trouble. lol I started a reply for this but it disappeared so you may get two responses. Thank you so much for this great review. Loved your comments. This was fun to write and I appreciate all those stars. Thanks!
Comment from royowen
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I like this five line poem, this reminds me of the song by Ricky Nelson who had a girlfriend in many places, half his luck in being a seasoned traveler. This is beautifully written a good entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Roy! Ricky Nelson. I remember the song. We are dating ourselves, yes? lol This was fun to write and I appreciate this awesome review very much. Thanks for your time. Lynda
reply by royowen on 20-Jan-2023
    Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A provocative write full of passion and sensuality here as this woman is looking for a man, there is no question as to what is going on here Lynda, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Nope. No question at all. lol Thank you, Dolly for this great review. I had a good time with this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate all those stars!
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Wow! your photo and words made me stutter. Your low-key, seductive approach to words is the only way to address this photo. I wish I could hang around and gawk, but life is happening all around me. I loved this! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
    lol! Thank you, John, for this awesome review. I haven't posted in a long time and this was the first review I've had in over a year. I'm tickled pink! You totally 'get' the whole message. And appears you got it easily. Loved "hang around and gawk." lol Many thanks, sir. Much appreciated.

    Lynda