Comment from Ida T. Johnson

Exceptional

So... the crazy man really CAN write serious poetry! This is so lovely. The sentiment is exactly what poetry is meant to do-whether serious or humorous. Excellent job of creating such a beautiful and coherent message in this truncated format. That lovely image takes this work over the top. I only regret I missed the voting and hope my 6-star-rating doesn't fall flat. Sometimes it's easy to share in the fanfare after the fact. But my review is truly heartfelt. CONGRATS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN!!! PLEASE keep sharing thy gifts with us!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Hey, Ida, hello. Yeah, sometimes I actually try on here. Lol. I have a lot more fun with the ridiculous crap but I'll squeak something serious in there here and there. The sad part is that it doesn't usually fly. I was surprised to see this come out on top, to be honest. Haha. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Ida. I'm glad you liked the piece.

:)

Ron

reply by Ida T. Johnson on 30-Jan-2023

Not only are you crazy but you are way too modest! Your works that I've read so far are all extremely well-written & clearly convey powerful & moving messages-yes, even the alleged "ridiculous crap"! I don't give empty praise & I certainly don't hand out 6's like candy; I have too much respect for my fellow writers & hope they don't do that to me. But I DO give credit where credit is due. I love & appreciate great writing- your writing! RE your comment that your serious stuff "doesn't usually fly": the voting booth is open for "The Horror of IT ALL"; there are only 4 entries but they are all dynamic, so I ranked them re certain criteria to guide my vote; they are all winners in my book. Yes, I know it's disappointing to not win the contest (been there!), but that doesn't diminish the quality of the work, & if we're really honest with ourselves we know when our stuff is really good or just crap. I look forward to reading more from you. Sorry for this long-winded dissertation! Enjoy your week!

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023

Thank you, Ida. Yes, the piece in that particular contest took a lot of thought and work. And yes, even when I'm goofing around, I still do my best at it. I'm sure if you dug into my portfolio a bit, you'd find a lot of stuff you'd love. You'd have to dig through a lot of silliness but there are some gems hidden throughout. I'm glad you liked this piece, Ida. Thank you again.

:)

Ron

Comment from 1Dreamer

Exceptional

Congratulations on your most deserved win. Share Thy Gift is truly an exceptional poem. All the best to you and I look forward to reading more of your writing.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for the kind review and big sixer, Dreamer. I'm honored. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend and thank you again.

:)

Ron

Comment from mrsmajor

Exceptional

Congratulations...
A truly poetic poem...I like the way you expressed your self here, Well worth the read for a short poem...
All the best!
Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for the kind review and giant sixer, Victoria. I really appreciate the gracious rating and congrats. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend and thank you again.

:)

Ron

reply by mrsmajor on 28-Jan-2023

You're welcome, Ron, it
was my pleasure..Hugs!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Exceptional

Ron, this is great! Congratulations on the very deserved win. It's witty and humorous, clever and on the subject that we all can relate to. I love your presentation and the choice of artwork.

Well done!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for the big sixer and the congrats, Yelena. When I came across this picture I just had to use it. I really appreciate the kind comments and generous rating. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.

:)

Ron

reply by Eternal Muse on 26-Jan-2023

So, Ron, are you up for a crown of heroic sonnets? (smile). There are still three weeks left. No, I understand it's a Herculean undertaking, and you already contributed a few times.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

I've been giving it some thought but can't really come up with something new to write a crown on. I'll keep trying to come up with something. I had an idea but I know the masses won't really appreciate it for all the work it would take. We'll see.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the Shakespearean feel of this little five-line poem. And you describe exactly why we write that we can draw out the feelings expressed in the reader. Congratulations on the win!!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review, Helen. I really appreciate the gracious stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked my little offering to the contest. I love your 'congratulations' GIF. I wish I had the brains to add thing like that to reviews. Have yourself a wonderful day, H.

:)

Ron

reply by lyenochka on 26-Jan-2023

You absolutely have the brains to do this, Ron. Just read this site and all it is is just one HTML statement using the website of the picture you want to share:
https://www.tutorialspoint.com/How-to-Insert-an-Image-in-HTML-Page

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

I'll have to check it out.

Thanks again, Helen.

:)

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

I was just reading a favourite quote from another FanStory writer about poetry expressing the universal. This poem illustrates that perfectly. We can often find our feelings mirrored in a poet's (or in my case, particularly a songwriter's) words. I think songwriters qualify as poets too.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Oh yes, song writing is definitely poetry. I was writing songs long before I was ever on this site. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sarah. I'm glad you liked the piece.

:)

Ron

reply by Sarah Tummey on 27-Jan-2023

Oh, well done. Are you on Apple Music, Spotify or anything like that? I'd like to hear your songs.

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2023

I'm nothing like a professional song writer with anything on Spotify or Apple. I was mostly talking about song "writing." Lol. I had dreams a long time ago but real life got in the way of that. I home recorded a song or two along the way but nothing ever came of them. If interested, there was a song I created for a contest on here years ago. I used a music program to create the music rather than actually playing any instruments even though I can play all of them. If you look in my portfolio and do a search, (magnifying glass) the list will come up in alphabetical order. The name of the piece is Fortress Walls. That's something I put on YouTube. The video's at the bottom. Not a great mix but at least while on here you can read the words along with it. Haha. I was writing songs years before I was ever on here. This place has taught me how to write them better though. Lol. Fortress Wall is the title if interested.

:)

Ron

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi DS,
This poem is well written and illustrated. I think it tells us that poets/writers should be honored. Also, that we all write about what touches us in hopes it will touch others.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congrats on the contest win.
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Hey, Joan, hello. Thank you so much for the great review and congrats. Yes, that's exactly what it means. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.

:)

Ron

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Jan-2023

You are most kindly welcome on both accounts, Ron.
You enjoy your day also,
Joan

Comment from Contests

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2023

Awesome. Wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the piece.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Exceptional

DS, this is an excellent entry for the 5 line poem contest.
All syllables are in check to relay a subtle yet profound
message that reverberates loud and lulling into a another
poet's heart or sensitive soul. Bravo ~ enjoy the six shower.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023

Thank you so much for the kind review and giant sixer, Diana. Who doesn't love a beautiful six shower? Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have yourself a wonderful day. Thank you again.

:)

Ron

reply by PoemsOfDD on 23-Jan-2023

All my pleasure Ron, after reading your entry I figured the committee would prefer your more meaningful words over my less sensitive entry. But? it was all I had in the tank at the time. ~D

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

A great read. Well composed and great use of language. The pause or "..." heightens the effectiveness of the poem's message. A thoroughly enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023

Thank you for the kind review, Jacqueline. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.

Ron

reply by JT traveller on 21-Jan-2023

Thanks Ron. You too.