Bad Moving Day
Complete Fiction.48 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Wonderful entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha!!! Now, this is funny. What a clever poem you've scribed in only twenty-five syllables -- well done! Of course, the picture you chose suits it perfectly too! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Hahahaha!!! Now, this is funny. What a clever poem you've scribed in only twenty-five syllables -- well done! Of course, the picture you chose suits it perfectly too! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Hi Dawn, this is funny, but I just came from the voting booth and I just gave you your first vote, so hoping it keeps getting more.
Thanks for this sweet review as I truly appreciate it and hope to go back and review yours. It was my favorite. So just wanted to let you know.
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Oops! There's a vote happening? I've checked several times -- thank you for the heads-up, and for your enjoyment of my work!!! (we must be on the same wavelength, although I sincerely haven't a clue who you are!) *smile*
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Debi -- you are supposed to be anonymous, dear -- delete this and delete YOURs too!!!!!
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DELETE, anonymous writer!!!
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Okay, now delete all of these. *wink*
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It's not giving me that option. It can you tell me how?
I am such an idiot.
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Shoot! I don't know then -- I thought it had to be you. I will try from my end, but if I can't, hopefully it will be noticed that it was NOT intentional.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words made me smile! The poem is cute, filled with humor,
descriptive and creative. I really liked the artwork which engaged me
to read this poem - it is awesome! The poem flows and connects well.
The words above the title go well with the theme of this poem.
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The author's words made me smile! The poem is cute, filled with humor,
descriptive and creative. I really liked the artwork which engaged me
to read this poem - it is awesome! The poem flows and connects well.
The words above the title go well with the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from royowen
Don't you just love this twenty five syllable word entry in this contest. This sounds like childlike logic, indeed it does bring the tomato sauce out of the bottle when one hits it on the bottom, upside down, why not constipation, well done, blessings Roy
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Don't you just love this twenty five syllable word entry in this contest. This sounds like childlike logic, indeed it does bring the tomato sauce out of the bottle when one hits it on the bottom, upside down, why not constipation, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Frank Malley
This excellent 25-word poem takes a funny comparison and puts it in a straight man's rhythm to make the poem's humor work. This poem's meter runs like a truncated limerick, and that liveliness also contributes to the chuckle engendered by this shorty.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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This excellent 25-word poem takes a funny comparison and puts it in a straight man's rhythm to make the poem's humor work. This poem's meter runs like a truncated limerick, and that liveliness also contributes to the chuckle engendered by this shorty.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2023
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Frank, it is especially nice to see this kind of awesome review when it has been a blind contest. These are truly the most rewarding when nobody knows who you are. Thank you so much for your very kind review and comments.
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Be well, Debi. Nice work. Frank
Comment from Sally Law
Oh dear! Poor dear! A punny one for when things get tough. I hope the toilet paper is two-ply. Sending you my best today as always, mystery poet, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) XOs
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Oh dear! Poor dear! A punny one for when things get tough. I hope the toilet paper is two-ply. Sending you my best today as always, mystery poet, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) XOs
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from G0dd0ll
This is so cute! I'm sure you have children!!! lol, Its short, sweet, and to the point! I bet you had fun writing it. If he really did it thats even more funny! lol Good job.
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This is so cute! I'm sure you have children!!! lol, Its short, sweet, and to the point! I bet you had fun writing it. If he really did it thats even more funny! lol Good job.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this made me laugh out loud and I can't believe how intuitive and clever children are sometimes, this is hilarious, much enjoyed, a fine write, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, this made me laugh out loud and I can't believe how intuitive and clever children are sometimes, this is hilarious, much enjoyed, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
That is hysterical! What a terrific, humorous short poem this is. And such a clever attempt to alleviate a constipation problem (bet it didn't work, though ð???.) Great picture too. Very well done.
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That is hysterical! What a terrific, humorous short poem this is. And such a clever attempt to alleviate a constipation problem (bet it didn't work, though ð???.) Great picture too. Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a cute picture. The story is cute too. He is twelve and too old to do that. This must have happened at the age about four.
Thank you for sharing such a well written poem.
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This is a cute picture. The story is cute too. He is twelve and too old to do that. This must have happened at the age about four.
Thank you for sharing such a well written poem.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
