Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your Three Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023

Thanks👍 I?m glad you liked my poem and I appreciate your encouragement👍

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Welcome Shane,
Congrats on your first post.
This is a quick poem which gives a strong image of a person trying to stay warm while standing out in the cold. This sounds more like children playing outside. Adults wouldn't be happy out in the cold.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023

Thanks for the rating👍
I appreciate your encouragement👍

reply by dragonpoet on 01-Feb-2023

My pleasure, Shane,
Joan

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Congratulations on your first post, Shane.
-You did a good job with it.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and a joyful mood, as well as rhyme.
-Good opening words, followed by ways to keep warm.
-A good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2023

Thanks👍 I?m glad you liked my poem and I appreciate your encouragement👍

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Jan-2023

You are very welcome, Shane!