Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are lovely. For me there is nothing like being around
children. I found the author's words to be sweet, kind, heartfelt and filled
with meaning. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words of this poem well.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you Harmony, For your encouraging view and generous rating both are very much appreciated. All the best to you as well .

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine write about close friendships that last a lifetime and I met a friend at school when I was 8 and we are still good friends, a magical write Cecilia and congrats on reaching the 100 milestone, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Dolly: Thank you for your very encouraging review and generous rating. You are appreciated. All the best to you as well.

Comment from Halfree

Average

Had to read the poem several times ... enjoyed very much ...had some -probrs with it .... third reading...got better with a second reading and thought it was and is good by 4th reading, Thanks for shearing.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for your kind review and rating. Both are appreciated. All the best to you.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

We all have those special friends when we were young (I'm 68 so it gets fainter and feinted).

I do remember certain things we did snd where we were.

Thanks for writing. John

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for your encouraging comments and generous rating. Very much appreciated. All the best to you as well.

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

Congratulations on your 100 post milestone. The two little lovelies in the artwork are worthy of your sweet poem. I like that you presented it as an invitation accepted. Oh tha adults could keeo it so simple.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023

Thank you for you encouraging comments and generous rating. Your words remind me that we as adults should always be mindful that we can learn from children as well. All the best to you as well.

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Congrats on your milestone of 100 posts. In my first year, (Jan '22) I am or was over 300 and am proceeding to 500 now. I like the thought and picture of the entry to a five-line poem.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thank you Tom for your encouragement, generous rating and review. Achieving 100 post has been slow going for me but to realise folk like you are proceeding toward 500 is inspiring and motivates me to stay focused and
to keep on writing and sharing. Your comments are truly appreciated.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Sweet, childhood poetry. It makes me reminiscent of my younger days. Well structured and composed. An enjoyable read. Best of luck in the contest. Thankyou.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thank you Jacqueline, for your encouraging comments and valuable review and rating. Your support and experience is appreciated.

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

This is so lovely and tender in image and word usage. I love the little gesture of young friendship offered. "Silvery" has 3 syllables which I think puts your line out by one. Perhaps you could write "silv'ry" or "silver" or use a different adjective like "sparkling" here? I love the alliteration that you used here and "silvery" was so lovely. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023

Thank you Karyn, your comments and observations are appreciated. All the best to you as well.