One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I started to read this poem yesterday but was too tired and didn't do it justice. I'm glad I waited because it's a beautiful poem as is the artwork you chose to accompany it.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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I started to read this poem yesterday but was too tired and didn't do it justice. I'm glad I waited because it's a beautiful poem as is the artwork you chose to accompany it.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate you take the time to read my poems. Love.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Love the words and alliteration in the sixth line, mother nature does seem to have some whimsies, your notes are cute " chick-girl" in my day all girls were chicks, did not realize how disrespectful this was, beautifully written and presented, ****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Love the words and alliteration in the sixth line, mother nature does seem to have some whimsies, your notes are cute " chick-girl" in my day all girls were chicks, did not realize how disrespectful this was, beautifully written and presented, ****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I had to pause thinking about "chicks" among the trees because I knew it was in the autumn and the baby chicks come in the spring. But you're right that it is slang for girls. Lovely presentation with the colorful words for fall.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I had to pause thinking about "chicks" among the trees because I knew it was in the autumn and the baby chicks come in the spring. But you're right that it is slang for girls. Lovely presentation with the colorful words for fall.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I didn't want to use 'girls' twice and I only had a syllable to spare. I agree is not a great word.
Thank you very much, big sister, for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Love you.
Marival
Comment from Scotti Lee
It's beautiful! I love the use of the words "follies", "austere," and frolic. You've done a really nice job here with your imagery! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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It's beautiful! I love the use of the words "follies", "austere," and frolic. You've done a really nice job here with your imagery! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Not sure what I like better to artwork or the presentation but anyhow this is Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed Day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Not sure what I like better to artwork or the presentation but anyhow this is Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed Day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy