You Have the Key
I am responsible for my actions and happiness.9 total reviews
Comment from royowen
If we only had access to them. I remember a friend of mine pointed out that we all have blind spots, we generally suffer from self deceit, entertaining them without due consideration, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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If we only had access to them. I remember a friend of mine pointed out that we all have blind spots, we generally suffer from self deceit, entertaining them without due consideration, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you Roy
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Thank you Roy
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Bless you
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Thank you Roy
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Well done
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Thank you for the feedback!
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Welcome
Comment from JT traveller
Very eloquently written. I personally would have chosen a different font as I found it hard to read. A clear message was delivered in your poem. Good composure and flow. A fine poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Very eloquently written. I personally would have chosen a different font as I found it hard to read. A clear message was delivered in your poem. Good composure and flow. A fine poem.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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My pleasure.
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Thank you!
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the positivity in these words, they are uplifting and kind and we all struggle with life from time to time and hope to cope with bravery and strength within, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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I love the positivity in these words, they are uplifting and kind and we all struggle with life from time to time and hope to cope with bravery and strength within, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you Dolly!
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Thank you Dolly!
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I found this poem
to have great advice. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment
the theme of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome and goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I found this poem
to have great advice. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment
the theme of this poem. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome and goes well with these words.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
Comment from prettybluebirds
This poem hits the nail on the head. We create the world around us and everything in it. As my father said, be careful of what you want, you might get it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This poem hits the nail on the head. We create the world around us and everything in it. As my father said, be careful of what you want, you might get it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Scotti Lee
I really like this, I like the tone you've set with the choice of "My Dear." The one thing I would like to see personally would be an added adjective or two in front of "path." Your life's path? Your soul's path? I also really love the image you've chosen!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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I really like this, I like the tone you've set with the choice of "My Dear." The one thing I would like to see personally would be an added adjective or two in front of "path." Your life's path? Your soul's path? I also really love the image you've chosen!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the feedback!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, it is up to each individual to find their own path, the happiness we will find so we have to try and keep this, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Excellent, it is up to each individual to find their own path, the happiness we will find so we have to try and keep this, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Key"
Yes!
We all have that gift but very few of us know what it means and how to use it.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery with a message.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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"The Key"
Yes!
We all have that gift but very few of us know what it means and how to use it.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery with a message.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from mermaids
Your words are perfect psychology, we can make our own path in life and our own treatment plan for ourselves. "All you'll ever need you own" is a true line that speaks to the reader. Excellent poem that all should read.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Your words are perfect psychology, we can make our own path in life and our own treatment plan for ourselves. "All you'll ever need you own" is a true line that speaks to the reader. Excellent poem that all should read.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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You got it!! Thank you!
