Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Pondering"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from patcelaw
I will soon be 85 years of age and I too have pondered many things. It seems to me that many today are not given to pondering and wondering about the things of life. I see you arte a retired marine and I thank you for your service. I also see you are a teacher and for that I also thank you. Without teachers, I fear it would be an impossible world in which to live.
Patricia
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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I will soon be 85 years of age and I too have pondered many things. It seems to me that many today are not given to pondering and wondering about the things of life. I see you arte a retired marine and I thank you for your service. I also see you are a teacher and for that I also thank you. Without teachers, I fear it would be an impossible world in which to live.
Patricia
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Patricia, for giving this a look, and for the positive thoughts. Bill
Comment from prettybluebirds
You sure came up with a lot of ideas from a tulip in a bottle. The artwork is perfect for the subject of this writing. Your choice of words is interesting. I always enjoy reading your writings.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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You sure came up with a lot of ideas from a tulip in a bottle. The artwork is perfect for the subject of this writing. Your choice of words is interesting. I always enjoy reading your writings.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Thank you, PBB, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was extremely artistic, Bill. I am still scratching my head. Is it about days gone by?
Made me think of Tulips on the Organ but that's the dark side of my mind.
Nicely done. This had an eerie feel to it.
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This was extremely artistic, Bill. I am still scratching my head. Is it about days gone by?
Made me think of Tulips on the Organ but that's the dark side of my mind.
Nicely done. This had an eerie feel to it.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Built from the sketch.
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ohhhh. Light dawns on marble head!
Comment from nomi338
This went completely over my head. It rhymed at least, even though I did not get it's meaning. One more review and I'm gonna need a nap. Whew! Overload, overload!
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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This went completely over my head. It rhymed at least, even though I did not get it's meaning. One more review and I'm gonna need a nap. Whew! Overload, overload!
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2023
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Tulips connect everything.
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Maybe, I know that two lips joined together make a kiss.
