A Challenge (for you!)
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Comment from mermaids
Your daughter is a talented artist and I am sure she will be a successful illustrator. Okay...let's send this young lady on an adventure. Here goes..
she walks the beach in silence
a mermaid she does see
together a friendship forms
they swim and play with dolphins
admiring coral, petting clownfish
young lady returns home
recording her adventures
with her ocean friend
Just a thought.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Your daughter is a talented artist and I am sure she will be a successful illustrator. Okay...let's send this young lady on an adventure. Here goes..
she walks the beach in silence
a mermaid she does see
together a friendship forms
they swim and play with dolphins
admiring coral, petting clownfish
young lady returns home
recording her adventures
with her ocean friend
Just a thought.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Hi mermaids :) sounds like a fun adventure!
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and for stepping up to the challenge!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from papa55mike
Katie has a lot of talent and I pray that you and her do a book together. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Katie has a lot of talent and I pray that you and her do a book together. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, mike, for your kind feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Sally Law
How wonderful this is! Please compliment you daughter for me. I don't have anything at the moment as I just did a Christmas story with my granddaughter. It will be a book as soon as I get everything over to my editor. I have many projects going at the same time. This will be scooped up in short order. I guarantee it. Sending you all my very best.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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How wonderful this is! Please compliment you daughter for me. I don't have anything at the moment as I just did a Christmas story with my granddaughter. It will be a book as soon as I get everything over to my editor. I have many projects going at the same time. This will be scooped up in short order. I guarantee it. Sending you all my very best.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Hi Sal :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback. It sounds like you are busy busy busy! Take care, best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
Love your daughter's creativity and the character so deserves a story! I will try to think something up. Great idea to showcase it here. Perhaps she might try the FanArt of this site?
For this particular 3-line poem contest, it says it should address a loved one. Just FYI.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Love your daughter's creativity and the character so deserves a story! I will try to think something up. Great idea to showcase it here. Perhaps she might try the FanArt of this site?
For this particular 3-line poem contest, it says it should address a loved one. Just FYI.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Hi Helen, trust me to miss that important requirement!! Thanks for letting me know!
Thank you for your lovely comments also? please let me know if you come up with something so I can share it with Katie :) x
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By the way, I posted my story for your daughter's artwork in a story called "A-Z Lands on Earth" yesterday. Hope Katie likes it! 💖
Comment from royowen
My six year old grandson's the same, lots and lots of artwork, reams of paper drawings done, yet on the other hand he's still a little ratbag boy. Love 'em to bits, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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My six year old grandson's the same, lots and lots of artwork, reams of paper drawings done, yet on the other hand he's still a little ratbag boy. Love 'em to bits, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from karenina
Your daughter is very talented!
My fourteen-year-old grandaughter, Emilyn, has the same aspirations. (Not sure how that happened genetically as I can't draw a stick figure) -- I wish Em was visitng today, she'd hop right this!
I pray one of our super talented story writers will take this up and if they do please PM me.
I'd love to see what they do...
Karenina
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Your daughter is very talented!
My fourteen-year-old grandaughter, Emilyn, has the same aspirations. (Not sure how that happened genetically as I can't draw a stick figure) -- I wish Em was visitng today, she'd hop right this!
I pray one of our super talented story writers will take this up and if they do please PM me.
I'd love to see what they do...
Karenina
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Hi Karenina :)
Thank you so much for your complimentary feedback - I'll be sure to pass it on to Katie :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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Great! I'! going to show it to Em, but will not see her until next weekend!
