The Reason I Exist
An ode to my mother16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful tribute to your Mother and your close relationship is evident in your poem. Magical words here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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This is a wonderful tribute to your Mother and your close relationship is evident in your poem. Magical words here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Shirley Rebstock
Very heartwarming picture and unique way of writing which makes it even more special. This has to be such a beautiful writing for your mom and she will always remember this. Lovely tribute. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Very heartwarming picture and unique way of writing which makes it even more special. This has to be such a beautiful writing for your mom and she will always remember this. Lovely tribute. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a well done three line poem in tribute to your mother. The single syllable words choices used to maximum effect here.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Such a well done three line poem in tribute to your mother. The single syllable words choices used to maximum effect here.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, Gloria!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Thank you for the feedback!
Comment from lancellot
Well, you can't argue with that. Our mothers are the reason we exist. And from this ode it sounds like you have a good one. That is something that is more and more a blessing today.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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Well, you can't argue with that. Our mothers are the reason we exist. And from this ode it sounds like you have a good one. That is something that is more and more a blessing today.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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I appreciate this feedback and reflection! Thank you.
Comment from Marilyn Geller
This is so filled with warmth. What a blessing indeed. I was not close to my mother. I was blessed as well though when I was able to assist an elderly lady from our church. We became so close and I loved her dearly. She passed away this past summer and I miss her every day. She was like a mother to me.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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This is so filled with warmth. What a blessing indeed. I was not close to my mother. I was blessed as well though when I was able to assist an elderly lady from our church. We became so close and I loved her dearly. She passed away this past summer and I miss her every day. She was like a mother to me.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
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I'm so sorry for your loss, she sounds like she was a very special woman. I hope you find the greatest pieces of who she was and apply them to your life today so that all you encounter also meet a piece of such a wonderful inspiration to you. Much love. Thank you for the feedback.
