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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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One of the hardest lessons for me to learn was to listen to that still small voice of God. Yes, He does speak to us, we just need to listen. Thank you for sharing.

And,still not fully capable of taking care of myself. (space after the comma)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
    Thanks Barbara for your continuous support and I'll see you're helping me with my grammar issues doing his hard time.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from thoughtgame2
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Very well said Ricky. I feel your pain and your progress in that piece. I really do.Thanks for sharing it with me and all the other readers that needed to hear those words speak to them. Keep them coming like god tells you.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2023
    Thanks for reviewing this and there is another on the way.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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This is a religious text that describes the author's belief in guidance from God throughout his life, from infancy to adulthood. The author describes his belief that God told him to do certain things, including starting a band and obeying instructions leading to a car accident. The text is heavily spiritual and may resonate with readers who share the author's beliefs in divine guidance. Overall it's a text that is heavily religious and personal to the author.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    This is the stuff that God has instructed me to write.
    Yes for my son Jason of course.
    And, through my son Jason and God above!
    Thanks Jasmine for understanding this in your fine review and comments!
    Doctor Ricky 1025
    "Still Preaching to the Choir Here At Fanstory"

Comment from Earl Corp
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I think I was halfway through before I realized you were writing this from your son's point of view . This was a very nice tribute to him. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Well I do know that my son had writing ability in 11th grade I've read his work and I do know that he helps me with this!
    So of course the credit was well justified!
    And thanks girl for understanding this!
    As always, Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir Here At Fanstory"