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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Widow"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A fun read. I have known ladies like your Widow Maycurr. Now that I write her name, I get the joke!
This is my last review for the day, and I am glad it is one that I leave with a smile.
Best regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Thank you, Mary.
Comment from kahpot
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There are some people you must learn to ignore or just give up will we find out if Sam be a priest or knocking on death's door, very intriguing and very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Thank you, kahpot.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's funny. I guess this reminds me of the parable that Jesus told about that stubborn widow who bothered that judge every single day until she got justice. Fun story.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Helen.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written 150 word story you have penned for the contest. You use very good descriptive words even with the required word count. Great imagery with the picture of the green door. Please check out this one thing:
standing, opened. I woman leaned........ Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Teri.
reply by Teri7 on 14-Jan-2023
    You are so welcome!!!
Comment from JT traveller
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Lovely prose. A rollicking tale of which I would like to read more. Well composed and the writing flows well. Congratulations on a job well done. Thankyou

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Thanks, Jacqueline
reply by JT traveller on 14-Jan-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Earl Corp
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Is the widow Maycurr somebody we should know or is it just the name you used for the story? I had to to laugh about the Green Door reference. Very nice job.

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
    Widow Maker. Get it?