One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Even when you reduce your syllable count, you have described something uplifting for your contest entry.
Do like your phrasing throughout. First line, by itself, would get a six-star rating.
Mark
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Gypsy,
Even when you reduce your syllable count, you have described something uplifting for your contest entry.
Do like your phrasing throughout. First line, by itself, would get a six-star rating.
Mark
Comment Written 15-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
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Mark,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
MariVal,
This is a strong use of six words and colors to describe the image of and feelings given by a sunrise.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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MariVal,
This is a strong use of six words and colors to describe the image of and feelings given by a sunrise.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Joan,
Thank you very much for the generous five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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You're welcome on both accounts, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Waking up to a dawn shown in this photograph would definitely ensure one would have a great day. We do have numerous morning glories in Texas, the ones at my house are purple. Thank you for sharing this beautifully prepared poetic package with us.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Waking up to a dawn shown in this photograph would definitely ensure one would have a great day. We do have numerous morning glories in Texas, the ones at my house are purple. Thank you for sharing this beautifully prepared poetic package with us.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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purple dawns are beautiful (*=*)
Thank you very much for the generous five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The greatest artist that ever painted remains with canvases like the one posted herein. Just like snowflakes and fingerprints no two sunrises or sets are the same. well done
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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The greatest artist that ever painted remains with canvases like the one posted herein. Just like snowflakes and fingerprints no two sunrises or sets are the same. well done
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Tom,
Thank you very much for the generous five stars review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
As usual you have the skill and gift with you ability to not produce the best narrative, but also work your magic with the presentation of artwork, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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As usual you have the skill and gift with you ability to not produce the best narrative, but also work your magic with the presentation of artwork, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome,
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Very gorgeous. I have been going to ask you, when you do the images, do you use a template? They always look so great. The sunset is really striking. And the words do blend with the images.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Very gorgeous. I have been going to ask you, when you do the images, do you use a template? They always look so great. The sunset is really striking. And the words do blend with the images.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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No, there's no template for what I do. The top picture is a regular picture, for the bottom picture I use a program called imageshack.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful presentation of pictures and font colors! The changes in color and size echo the uplifting of the spirit while watching the sun rise. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Beautiful presentation of pictures and font colors! The changes in color and size echo the uplifting of the spirit while watching the sun rise. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Big Sister. (*÷*)
I'm glad you like it. It was a bit of a challenge.
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This poem is beautifully presented. The color of the dawn is gorgeous and uplifting indeed. The morning glory is a great addition.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This poem is beautifully presented. The color of the dawn is gorgeous and uplifting indeed. The morning glory is a great addition.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Lisa,
Thank you very much for your time, six stars review, and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 6 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
I love your photo choice. It blends well with the words.
There is something about the dawn that lifts our spirits.
And the morning glory at the bottom of the page pushes the dawn up.
Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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I love your photo choice. It blends well with the words.
There is something about the dawn that lifts our spirits.
And the morning glory at the bottom of the page pushes the dawn up.
Good job.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs